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Hey everyone!

Okay, I’ve changed it to present tense, but with all the confusing edits on the doc I think it will be easier if I work on finishing the draft in a separate doc. I’ll use what’s already on this doc and add to the ending to flesh out the beauty of the ordinary hands. I may need to rework some sections that are already written so it fits the ending. I’ll be working on it steadily this afternoon until I finish, and as soon as I’m done I’ll just post the whole thing at the end of our doc. Then you all can check it out, and if you think it will work, you can start editing that version. Or, if you don’t think it will work, maybe we can work parts of it into the current version.

Will that work for you guys? Just trying to figure out how I can finish off the draft as efficiently as possible so you all have a chance to edit.

For the sake of my sanity and so you don’t waste time editing sections that I might cut out, could you please save your awesome editing until I’ve put in the revised opening and new ending? I’ll still keep an eye on the forum and the doc, so if you have any suggestions, please do share them. 😀

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