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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Returning in the forum Announcements 6 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen *hugs* Yas, I am back! And thanks!
@taylorclogston Ey, well, we can become active again together! 😬😊 And thank you, it’s nice to be done. I’m hoping to do a course in linguistics soon, and mostly focus on my writing, editing, and possibly doing more one-on-one teaching of writing.
@anne_the_noob14 YAS I am back! I missed you…[Read more] -
J.A.Penrose started the topic Returning in the forum Announcements 6 years, 7 months ago
Hello Parimis!
I vanished off the face of the earth for a few months, it seems. However, I have officially graduated from school, completed exams, and thereforeย should be free again, like the old days.
I’m really sorry for the general chaos of me not being around, and not really speaking to anyone at all.
Thank you so much @Jane-Maree for…[Read more]
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Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Sorry I haven’t been around! I’m currently in Vietnam so I’ve been busy around here…but I finally got some time to write!
@anne_the_noob14 – Thank you! Lol, Racleva would hate you if she knew you felt even remotely sorry for her. ๐ And good luck on NaNo!
@steward-of-the-pen – Ooh, your world sounds so cool! I wonder where that tunnel…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Word War VII in the forum Word Wars 6 years, 7 months ago
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Good job, guys! I’m sorry I haven’t been around lately. I became dreadfully ill and had no appetite for writing. ๐ I managed to write a little something now, though. Do with it what you will.
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Caedon followed Runawin down the hall. Even if he couldn’t go outside, he was still curious to see what other rooms the castle had. He only hoped…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen I love it! I love Runawin’s reactions to the table and the “pale creatures”! And I can’t wait to see what the tunnel is!
I know I keep saying this, guys, but I don’t have time to write anything right now… Trying to get ready for NaNo this week, and today is a family birthday party at our house. I might can write a bit…[Read more]
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Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Racleva had been seated for half a second when a yelp echoed from the doorway. She groaned. Could there not be one moment of peace in that place?
Caedon darted up from next to her, dashing towards the door while Theseus followed closely. She saw a flash of frightened blue eyes, not far off the floor. A child?
Then Caedon slowly extended his…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@elisha-starquill – What was your idea for a room?
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The creature calmed slightly when Caedon spoke to it. Theseus knelt down and held out his hand. Caedon was content to let him take the lead on taming the wolfโfor he saw that it was not a dog after all. โShhh. Itโs okay girl,” Theseus whispered. “Donโt worry, weโre friends. What should we…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Guild Master's End of School Exams in the forum Prayer Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Anytime!
The exams are split up on separate days for different subjects and things, so she’ll be doing them for another few weeks. Not sure when they finish.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Guild Master's End of School Exams in the forum Prayer Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Word war #6 in the forum Word Wars 6 years, 7 months ago
@r-m-archer @steward-of-the-pen Aw, thanks! I honestly didn’t expect that to happen. xD
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Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 – Lol, if you liked her I can’t imagine what you’d think of my MC. ๐ But it’s not her fault. She’s a good person, and doing what she thinks is right. Remember, her only role model for the past six years was the most evil man on the planet, who’s been lying to her and manipulating her, so…yeah. xD
The more we go on, the more I…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 @christlover Good job, guys! I did notice that both of you (I’m sure accidentally) referred to Racleva with her actual name instead of the fake one she provided. Other than that, it was perfect.
@christlover, I like how you portrayed Caedon! He would definitely stand up for Runawin to protect her.
Sorry that Theseus looked so bad…
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Evelyn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen I KNOW RIGHT.
Finally. ๐
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Yes! ๐
Ok cool.
Omw I love it! I love her reaction to the humans and everything ๐ ๐
@christlover Thanks! ๐
@ariella-newheart Thanks! Yay!
Ooh… I like it!! And if Caedon can calm Runawin down, that’s awesome!
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Lucas stood facing the door, dagger held ready though he hoped he wouldn’t need to use it.…[Read more]
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Christlover replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
I am going to switch up a couple of aspects of the fight between Racleva and Theseus so that it better matches his training. Just for future reference, do you want Racleva to be more of a redemption arc character or is she a hard-core villain? (Those are my own made up terms, if y’all know the correct ones they would be very…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Ooh, nice drawing! That is how I imagined the layout of the hall.
@christlover It’s perfectly okay if you changed the setup of the hall. The castle is very flexible (literally). It may appear different in the eyes of different characters. The goal of this topic is to help you get to know your characters by writing with them. If…[Read more]
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Christlover replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Good job. The touch with Theseus being surprised was perfect, that was exactly how he would act as he is quite awkward around girls unless he knows them well. There are a couple of things that I realized I didn’t put in my earlier description of him that are probably important. He is incredibly independent, so after he gets over…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen This is gonna be great! Lucas has ZERO experience/knowledge/whatever with talking animals, so please don’t feel bad if he tries to kill her at first. Is she gonna be a good-guy or a bad-guy?
And she’s gonna be a bit weird about interacting with humans, huh. Nice… ๐
(also guys, don’t forget… If you don’t want to interact…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 It understand completely. That makes Lucas’ character even more interesting to me. ISTJs are awesome, by the way!
@christlover ENTPs are cool too! And you’re welcome. ๐ @steward-of-the-pen gave me the idea of making a character chat and I just ran with it. xD
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