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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 @christlover Good job, guys! I did notice that both of you (I’m sure accidentally) referred to Racleva with her actual name instead of the fake one she provided. Other than that, it was perfect.
@christlover, I like how you portrayed Caedon! He would definitely stand up for Runawin to protect her.
Sorry that Theseus looked so bad in the eyes of Caedon. Like I said he is kind of impulsive.
No worries! Caedon will continue to observe Theseus with a slight suspicion, but I think if they get to know each other they could be friends.
Alrighty! The next person to write would be either @elisha-starquill or @steward-of-the-pen.










