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@elisha-starquill

Good job. The touch with Theseus being surprised was perfect, that was exactly how he would act as he is quite awkward around girls unless he knows them well. There are a couple of things that I realized I didn’t put in my earlier description of him that are probably important. He is incredibly independent, so after he gets over his shock some he will probably challenge Racleva as to why she should be in charge. He doesn’t like taking orders from other people unless he knows and trusts them. He is also not shy about using his elemental powers, so they will probably come up at some point. He is also very curious so sometime soon he will probably suggest they explore the other rooms. The last thing is that he has a lot of experience with people trying to lie to him, so at some point he will probably begin becoming suspicious of Racleva. I will give more of his backstory later on, but probably format it into the story somehow. The other thing that I noticed was that you called him Thaddeus, I named him after the character from the Greek myths. Don’t worry about getting his name wrong, it happens to lots of people.

@steward-of-the-pen

Theseus actually had a pet wolf at one point, so he is super close to wolves. It will be interesting to see how the dynamic between him and Runawin ends up working.

@anne-the-noob14

Lucas’ back story sounds really interesting! I look forward to learning more about him.

I will write more into the story later, right now I have to go.

Good luck to all, I can’t wait to see what happens next.