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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Depressing Poetry LOL in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @dakota @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter
I have a short excerpt from a song I wrote around October. Hope you enjoy.
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I feel like there’s too much space,
Not enough love, not enough grace,
To help me rise from my broken down state.
I’m tired of living, the same old stuff every day…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer started the topic Depressing Poetry LOL in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@dakota @esmeralda-gramilton @mayacat @trallion @urwen-starial @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter
Hi Peoples!
I started this thread to post some of my depressing poetry that i like to write. Typically it is lyrical poetry. It’s not very good so you will have plenty to call out a critique. If anyone else has any depressing poetry to post you are…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @naiya-dyani @dakota
Logan:
“I’m sorry.” Rhioe apologized. “I shouldn’t be asking you about this.”
“No! It’s fine Rhioe. Thank you so much for caring . . . for asking,” Logan was silent for a moment as he carried her, “You remember when we first met and- and- I locked up?”
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character memes in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
XD Tai lololol
Awww poor babies… they need hugs 🙁
Hmm let’s see… (It’s long, sorry XD )
If my characters lived in the same house:
Greyl in the morning: “Who put dirt in the coffee maker, and why?”
Marek: “Me. I wanted to give it a more earthy flavor.”
Greyl: “I will kill you. And it will be a slow and painful…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic My Landing Page–At Last! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic My Landing Page–At Last! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota @kayla-skywriter @mayacat @seekjustice @edmund-lloyd-fletcher
Tagging you guys separately so the spam filter doesn’t eat things up. XD
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota Sure! If you want to get a doc started, my email is naiyadyani@gmail.com.
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character memes in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 @esmeralda-gramilton @dakota @urwen-starial @law0413
Time for another . . .
If my guy characters were roommates:
Tai to Gerik: you’re a terrible roommate and nobody likes you
Dari: Let’s try phrasing it this way: “When you do this, it makes me feel this.” 🙂
Tai: Ok. . . When you. . . live here. . . it makes me feel. . . a…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @naiya-dyani
“I want to tell you Rhioe but. . . it hurts so much. . you know?” Logan said.
“I know.” Rhioe said quietly. “It’s just. . . You’ve been so kind to me, and I can’t stand to see you look so hurt.” There was a silence, and Rhioe wondered if she’d…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota @urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @naiya-dyani
Korynth, Iyan, and Jin:
Light was barely glowing in the eastern sky as Korynth and Iyan reached the tower with their prisoner. The trek to the tower had been a long, cold one and Korynth was glad for Iyan’s sake that it was over. Just the same he hated every time…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota @urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter @naiya-dyani
Logan & Rhioe:
Logan blinked. He wasn’t expecting the question. What am I supposed to say to her? He opened his mouth to speak, but no words came. He was grateful that she noticed and cared enough to ask. But could he really let her see the things that hurt him? T…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota Whoops! XD I guess I’ve just had my main character Grace in mind (who’s blonde).
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Kedori nodded rapidly. Just out of breath. Are you ready?
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @dakota @urwen-starial @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter
Kedori dodged piles of garbage and rubble on the road as he raced for the Sector Two gate. Please let her be there, God. Please.
At the sight of the blonde woman by the gate, tears sprung into his eyes. She got permission. He’s going to be o…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @dakota @naiya-dyani @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter
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The streets were dark as Jin was led through them by the two officers who had come to take him to the Tower. The sun was just beginning to rise in the east, but its light was hidden behind the dark buildings. His breath huffed gently in the cold…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @dakota @naiya-dyani @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @kayla-skywriter
Back to it.
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Rhioe blinked hard as her eyes adjusted as Logan carried her out of Leona’s house and back outside. The dark gray clouds had cleared a little, enough for the evening sun to shine through a little. Logan’s shoes barely made any noi…[Read more]
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Zee replied to the topic I’m Starting a New Blog Series–Want to Join? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@naiya-dyani, the website is https://shardsofsevia.wordpress.com, and the actual blog page is under the heading “This and That” at the top right-hand corner.
@dakota, @hope-mcclellan, @deeprun, and anybody else who’s interested–I forgot to mention that I’m hoping to start this series early next year, so if interested parties could get their…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota @amaustin @sam-m @arindown
Alright, alright I’m emerging from my hobbit hole now. LOL 😆
Would you rather be jailed or exiled?
Willie: Hmm. . . Being exiled could be interesting. I guess I’d rather be exiled than be in jail.
Jordan: Wow. I’ve already spent a night in jail. Ehh it was okay. Exile would be nice.
Judah: I’ve already…[Read more]
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Zee replied to the topic I’m Starting a New Blog Series–Want to Join? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
Please do, @deeprun! I’ll be looking forward to seeing what they (and you) have to share.
No worries, @dakota. When I said “young” I was thinking essentially anyone under thirty, even though that may not feel very young to some of you. You’ll understand when you’re my age…
Thanks for being willing to participate, everybody!
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Drowning in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
@dakota Thanks so much, Dakota!!!
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Zee replied to the topic Your Story’s Big Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
Those questions sound like a story I would want to read, @dakota. What’s the genre, and what’s it about?
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