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@dakota @esmeralda-gramilton @mayacat @trallion @urwen-starial @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter

Hi Peoples!

I started this thread to post some of my depressing poetry that i like to write. Typically it is lyrical poetry. It’s not very good so you will have plenty to call out a critique. If anyone else has any depressing poetry to post you are welcome to join me in this thread. I’ll post a short one to kick things off. It’s horrible I know but hey! I never claimed to be a good poet. LOL!

 

Last Chance

Give me one last

Give me one last chance

I need a little more time tonight

To prove myself to you

I need more time to fight

I know I failed you last time

But I promise you I won’t this time

 

Give me one last

Give me one last chance

I need a little more of you trust

To prove my love to you

Before I turn to dust

I know I am a dirty wreck

But I promise I will do better this time

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If you have any questions or suggestions, feel free to comment.