claire

Hey, @claire-h ! Thanks for reaching out! I’d love to do whatever I can to be as helpful to you as possible. 🙂 I guess before we get into anything else, I would like some feedback as to how you would be interested in keeping in touch.
Discord would be my personal first choice, but I know not everyone uses it, so email, google hangout, or whatever…[Read more]

@claire-h

You’re welcome! I guess I just kind of assumed she was living with him from what you said up above? But this was also my first time reading about your story, so I’m sure I have some things wrong . . .  I’m glad my ideas were somewhat helpful though! XD

@claire-h

No problem!  I’m glad I could hep.  I wish you the best in your writing 🙂

@writergirl101 Thanks for the tag.😄

@claire-h Wow, this is really intriguing. I’m just going to throw out a few ideas that might help.

1. What if Dr. Arrowood is trying to protect someone? That could be motivation. What if, lets say, his son did something bad, for one of his father’s “projects” and now he’s going crazy because of the memory. So…[Read more]

@writergirl101 Thanks for tagging me! I don’t know how much help I can be, but I shall try! 🙂

@claire-h

Your story sounds really interesting! And I really like your villain. I’ve noticed a serious lack of good villains in fiction! 😉

For the first question, I think giving him a bad memory he wants to get rid of is a good motivation. Maybe he…[Read more]

@writergirl101

Hi Ella!  Thanks for tagging me!  I liked your suggestions, especially the one where Dr. Arrowood has some sort of attachment to Rubi (hello complications!)  How have you been?

@claire-h

Hi Claire!  I’m Lily.  You have a really interesting plot situation; is your story MG or YA?  (Sometimes, when I’m working on a proje…[Read more]

@claire-h

I totally get that.

Hmmm…  I’ll have to think about that…  Maybe he lost a limb that can’t grow back…?  Never mind, I don’t think I’m helping anymore… 😜😂

Of course!  I’ll tag some more people to give more thoughts (hopefully–come on guys, don’t let me down &#x…[Read more]

@claire-h

What’s up!  I feel you–I do this ALL the time…  (btw, if none of these suggestions are helpful, just ignore what I said and listen to what the next person says 😉)

Hmmm…  what if he had some sort of physical scar (+ emotional trauma) that he just can’t get rid of?  If he managed to get his trauma under control, he’d still hav…[Read more]

@claire-h

I love that idea!  I’d always read books about wiped memories/amnesia, lol!!  😆  It’s a cool setting, too.

@claire-h,

Thanks for the feedback! And you were at the webinar? Cool. 🙂

Ooh, I have never ever heard anything like that before, which of course makes it unique. I think it’s a very very good idea that will turn out well if you get your facts right. Putting Peru into the future will make things a lot easier. 🙂 As long as you make sure you know…[Read more]

@claire-h

Hi there! That’s neat you’re learning Koine too. And, I’m happy someone else recognizes the signature. I thought about doing a serious one but then I just went with this to see if anyone would get it.

Also, your WIP sounds very cool and unique.

@kimlikesart

Fine then, keep your secrets 😉

I draw people, mainly from my own…[Read more]

@claire-h @dakota Thanks so much! 😀

@lonathecat, I can’t think of any other short stories really, since I’m usually more of the 300+ page book reader. Do you have any favorites?

Nice to meet you, @claire-h. I love the idea of a futuristic /dystopia story set in the jungles of Peru. That sounds so cool! You’ll have to post updates as you progress. My dad teaches church history.…[Read more]

@claire-h

Sorry…I’ve been on vacation.

The cover is wonderful.😍 I love the word font, and the dragon silhouette. My only suggestion would be to make the name Arindown a little smaller, but you don’t need to change it.

Thanks so much.

btw, your new profile picture is really cute.