@deeprun, She’s beautiful! 😀 I love what you did with her hair – making it like a corona of flame around her head. I’d never drawn her with pixie-short hair but it fits her so well! AND IT’S SO DIFFERENT TO ACTUALLY SEE HER IN COLOR. THE EYES – THE EYES! And her gown is so pretty too! The dark blue is such a good complement to her hair – having…[Read more]
I don’t mind either way! Go ahead!
(Side note… your forum signature is SO familiar and I love it but I can’t place it… what’s it from? XP)
@claire-h, I know the feeling. That’s partly why I cheated and just used a historical backdrop so I don’t have to build EVERYTHING. Lol. No, historical fantasy just replaces brainstorming with research because unless one wants to go whole hog and rewrite an alt history with a rationale for why things changed, one still must follow the big…[Read more]
@urwen-starial Deciding whether to laugh at your characters or give them a hug. . .
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This one was also one was kinda spontaneous, but I still have simiular feelins at the time I wrote it. Feel free to comment,…[Read more]
I’m going to assume I didn’t annoy anyone and tag you all again. I have a new part. I’m not sure if it’s any good, but hopefully it adds a little to my overdue participation.
Callia traced the words engraved on the rough stone of the alleyway she was in. It made her a…[Read more]
In the meantime, here’s Rin’s next part.
Rin shielded his eyes from the glaring autumn sun. It was not a welcome sight this early in the morning after two sleepless nights of work. He hadn’t heard anything from Kenma since the night of t…[Read more]
Are you guys okay with Outopia possibly making a cameo in my WIP? (This is mainly a question for Ember, but I wanted to make sure evryone was good with the idea as well)
One of my characters is currently stranded in an unknown city and I think…[Read more]
I sincerely hope I’m not bothering anyone by tagging them. If I am, please say so.
I finally sat down and told myself “Stop procrastinating, or you’ll never feel like doing this ever again.” and decided I’m going to write a part here. It’s been ages since…[Read more]
I did some more sketches . . . mostly Enyet ones (Grace & Kiet) 😛
(In case you were wondering, the name Enyet comes from Kiet’s nickname for Grace. He calls her Enya, which means grace in his native language. Much easier to pronounce lol)
Grace doesn’t act like this in the story. . . but y’know, I…[Read more]
*visiting Tai’s house when he’s an adult*
Enna Sora: That tea was. . . interesting. What kind was it?
Tai: Huh? Oh, I just boiled some Gatorade
Enna Sora: *rubs temples and mutters about ‘how much work I put into raising you’*
Grace: *slowly sets down cup* I think I’ll just. . . not ask about…[Read more]
Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Does anyone want to read this slightly depressing poem? in the forum Poets 2 weeks, 4 days ago
(Wow, I’m late to this thread…) This poem pretty muchly sums up how I’ve been feeling lately.
As everyone else has said, I have no negative critique. And I totally understand the “not 100% comfortable to share personal poems”… But I’m happy you felt strong enough to share it 🙂
Um… other than those couple thoughts, I don’t…[Read more]
XD Those are awesome lol
@anne_the_noob14 XD XD XD
Kiet: *secretly plays loves me/loves me not* *lands on loves me not* *goes a bit pale and tries not to cry*
Grace: *comes up behind him* just count the stem too
Kiet: *yelps* *goes red and disappears into nearest tree* *spends the next few hours trying to figure out what Grace might have meant by…[Read more]
Grace: *plays the flower loves me/loves me not game* *purposely chooses a flower she knows has an odd number of petals* Would you look at that. Kiet likes me. 🙂
Enna Sora: Why did you guys just leave the last cookie sitting in the jar for weeks??
Kiet: I figured someone else could have it. . .
Grace: I…[Read more]
Hi guys! I’m so so so so sorry I haven’t been participating and writing lately! I feel really badly, but I’ve been caught up with one of my WIPs and I haven’t had the time or energy to finish the last part I was working on, plus life in general…[Read more]
@urwen-starial Not sure if you’re welcoming me but thank you!
Leif: Quick! Call 911!
Equanimity: I’m trying, but the 9 won’t work!
Leif: Turn the phone upside down and use the 6!
Equanimity: Great idea!
Hathach: *momentarily stops choking* What-
Hathach: FOUR MONTHS.
Equanimity: What is it?
Leif: Oh it’s not t…[Read more]
Hello, all! I have a short story that is in need of critique. I will tag those who have already beta-read my work, but anyone else’s opinion would be appreciated.
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