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Katherine Baker replied to the topic Free verse poem in need of critics in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Hello Sir Leeds! Glad to meet you! Don’t think I have yet.
Before I get into it, I’d like to start by saying: Wow. That was very good! I really liked it. Here are the answers to your questions.
1) I’d like to submit this to a Christian publisher, but I’m not sure if the rewording of Hebrews 11 is too gritty/graphic for my aud…[Read more]
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Emma Starr replied to the topic Poem critics…come hither! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@sir-leeds Thanks! I hadn’t thought too much about straightforwardness vs subtleness in my poetry. Now I see that it’s much needed. 😀
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Emma Starr started the topic Poem critics…come hither! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
I want to submit this poem to Story Embers. Please tear it apart! Tell me if it’s any good, what to fix, anything! 🙂 @libby @scribbles @sir-leeds @evelyn @k-a-grey @kb-writer
Moonflower
She is the moonflower.
A mysterious being in the daylight,
With no apparent beauty
But her fluid grace.
Her leaves and tiny tendrils search, pr…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic Vacation's Over in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
Hey guys!
The holidays have ended and school has started and it’s time to get back to work! (But it’s like… writing. Fun work. This’ll be grand.)
So, to start things off, swing over to the accountability forum and share some goals. (Then I can come around weekly and bug you about them.) (Also, you’ll get more wri…[Read more]
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Selah Chelyah started the topic A Matter of Life and Death… in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal @bama-rose @raemarie @corissa @kate @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @j-parkhurst @gabbyj @cassandraia @chalice @noahlitle @julianne @germaine-han @maddiejay @sesi @r-j-karas @rosemarylouise @msqueen8 @samuel @eden-anderson @professorsjb @elizabeth @scarletimmortalized @parker @katthewriter @pookiemonster… Hey! You’re off the hook now. Brandon asked me to write the story…
But that being said I really need reference stuff from other peeps. And I heard you say that you have lots of reference info from younger siblings. Also… I need to have the story at least first drafted by Thursday, so the sooner the better. If you could say…[Read more]
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Buddy J. replied to the topic Dream Prompt War in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Hey Rillumen… Are we awake? I just realized that we’ve been moving really slow on this. What do we need to…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic Dream Prompt War in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
A new month, a new war!
I’ll come back to make this more wordsy later.
HERE is the document.
The prompt is “Dream Sequence.” So, basically we write a character experiencing a dream.
To start us off:
1. Let’s fill the document with dream cliches, interesting dreams you’ve had, and ideas for how we want this to end up (funny, nightmare,…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller replied to the topic November Word War in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Alright everybody, lets get final wordcounts in.
Nice work this month!
@emma-starr
@missfaeriekaiti
@happyholly_c
@corkybookworm
@scribbles
@quinn-ofallon
@kayla-joy
@nuetrobolt
@pookiemonster
@inkling-for-christ
@sir-leeds
@morgan-tailor
@rolena-hatfield
@grace-tolkienista
@graceabounds2129
@wordsmith
@brie-donning
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Brandon Miller started the topic MERRY CHRISTMAS! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Hey guys, hi.
A few things.
First off, do you guys know why I say “Hey guys, hi”? Bc if you don’t, this video will enlighten you (and make you laugh really, really hard): Lobster Bisque Christmas.
Secondly, HI HOW ARE YOU, FRIENDS? I have no great story or excuse for the fact that’ I’ve been gone for so long. Just the usual: school, wor…[Read more]
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Buddy J. replied to the topic November Word War in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Okay peeps… well run! I certainly had fun, but now I’m ready to be done for the night. I got 1771 words putting me just over 20000 words for the month. I thank you all! Brie Donning… well done! You stayed ahead of me!
Have a great night Rillumen, rest well… God bless you…[Read more]
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Buddy J. replied to the topic November Word War in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Okay Rillumen… Tomorrow’s the big day… the last day…LET’S PUMP OUT SOME SERIOUS WORDNESS BETWEEN NOW AND THE END! LET’S GET ANOTHER TWENTY THOUSAND WORDS BETWEEN NOW AND THEN!
(P.S. I just contributed 1511 words… *nods* let’s do…[Read more]
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Buddy J. replied to the topic November Word War in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Huzzah!!!
Rillumen! I return after a day of silence… and I return with nothing in hand. No word count. Tired. Ready to relax. But part of me really wants to get in at least a small word-count. So first off I’m kinda looking for some encouragement (imagine that… with wordsmith just asked for encouragement😂)… Secondly… I’d…[Read more]
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Buddy J. replied to the topic November Word War in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
Rillumen… It may be Tuesday, but you’re not off the hook! We still have a war to fight, and we need to fight it hard. Not including today, we only have three days left, and whether we likes it or not the war is gonna end. *turns and looks each one of you in the eye*
We just passed the 200000 word marker… but let’s look at a few statistics.…[Read more]
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