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And this is the final piece of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀

EPILOGUE:

The magnificent life of Chloe Juancarlos was a unique one.

When she accepted Eric Diego’s card-making business, along with her friends Chloe ventured across the realm. From Arizokaland towns to th…[Read more]

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CHAPTER TWELVE:

A splinter of light pierced the utter dark.

Chloe bolted upright and glanced upon her cream-shaded bed. Pale walls decorated with vibrant flowers surrounded her. Dazzling, golden light descended through her window upon the multicolored floor. A wreath of…[Read more]

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Two poems this week!

This one is another ‘spontaneous inspiration’ one. As always, enjoy, critique and, if you want to, post…[Read more]

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This one took me months to write, but I finally finished it. Critique and enjoy!!

Watchmen (Sound it Loud)

Watchman,…[Read more]

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Hope you all are doing well.  As always, critique and enjoy! 🙂

Torchlighters

Go! the torch must be carried on
All the…[Read more]

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*takes in deep breath*

Alright, the final climax is written. Feel free to critique. If you think anything in this chapter is a little weird, unnecessary, or that you just disliked, and that might be because of Chloe’s odd POV, you may share your thoughts on them if…[Read more]

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This one was also one was kinda spontaneous, but I still have simiular feelins at the time I wrote it. Feel free to comment,…[Read more]

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YIKES!! Sorry guys, I forgot to post this past week.

This one came from a sorta random inspiration. I was sitting, thinking…[Read more]

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Alright, next chapter out!

Read on and critique if you wish. However, if for some reason any of these scenes you happen to find a little dark or violent (which I hope aren’t), please share your thoughts on them. Thanks and enjoy!

CHAPTER TEN:

The maze was a…[Read more]

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This a revision of song I wrote a while ago. Critique as hard as you want and enjoy!

The Surrendering

I’m down to my last…[Read more]

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Okay, this one I just finished. I wanted to write this one ever since last fall but I just couldn’t get -get it! In the end,…[Read more]

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Hi, I got to chapter 6? I hope my commenting didn’t seem too heavy, because I love the story already!

There were a few things I commented on that I wasn’t sure about, but word flow could be better.

Please remember: This isn’t a judge of your writing, I’m just trying to see if there’s a better way to put it.

I always feel bad when I…[Read more]

@nuetrobolt YAY!! 😀 😀 Yep, that’s me! 🙂

@nuetrobolt

Just finished it! It’s awesome!! 😀 I kinda feel like I didn’t comment much, and so wasn’t really helpful lol but I commented on everything that popped out at me, besides nit-picky things like spelling/grammar.

I WANT TO READ MOOORRRREEEE :'(

@nuetrobolt

I’m interested. May I?

@nuetrobolt Ok!

*opens doc* Did you mean to let me have editing mode? I don’t mind lol but just making sure that’s purposeful.

@nuetrobolt @libby

Thank you so much! Maybe someday you will be able to sing it . . . if I ever become a good enough composer, because I’d love to set this one to music.