Eitan

Kimmi started the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan (:

Six year old Chena Batjehoshaphat laughed as she and her two brothers chased a plump frog.

“Hurry! Hurry! Before he reaches the stream!” Nine-year-old Malachi rushed ahead, shoving his little sister aside.

Far behind them Levi, his chin only reaching a finger over the tall grass began to cry. Chena glanced back, her shoulders low…[Read more]
Kimmi replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan

Thanks (:
Kimmi replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan

‘It seems that you just took the original wording and added, instead of really changing it.’

Sorry. 🙁
Kimmi replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan

Funny about that,… I don’t remember how I did it…

As to your critique about calling all the moms and dads abba and imma because I refer to God that way or changing everything. I get your point about that.

The reason I want to use Hebrew names for God is because so few of the people I suspect to read it know of His names. I love all…[Read more]
Kimmi replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan

Thank you! I will work through this much more thoroughly. (:

Do you know how to start a new thread? I might have found out by tomorrow. 🙂
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago

@andrew Okay, just thought I’d ask. It’s okay. 🙂

@naiya-dyani Yeah, it is!! Thanks for pointing that out.

@eitan You’re welcome.
ShiningScribe replied to the topic Cheesehead makes an entrance in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan

Wisconsin…hmmm….mostly known for outdoor activities, beer, cheese, and bratwurst…oh yes, and Packers football. I only get into the outdoors, cheese and bratwurst. My husband (who grew up in Texas) describes Green Bay as a place caught in the 80’s…it’s pretty blue-collar up here and family-oriented. I love the green and the wat…[Read more]
Arindown replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan Looks like you thought that out pretty well. I like all your weapons and magic.

@beth20 No problem. Aunty A is fine…she’s got kittens.😍 Don’t feel like you always have to reply when I tag you.

Coffee and Fruit Loops for breakfast??? That would have me bouncing off the walls.😄 Me and coffee only get along good when the situation calls…[Read more]
Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Problems with viewing a thread in the forum Guidelines & FAQ 5 years, 10 months ago

Hey @eitan @katja-r@luciusbraun! Is this problem still occurring for you all? I think we may have fixed it with a software update (so it works on my end when I test it), but I wanted to see if that was the case for you as well or not.
Kimmi replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan (Revised original prologue). I get what you said about the Romans burning homes, but I explain why this happened later, and why it could happen.

The little girl’s chest steadily rose and fell, her coarse sheets just barely brushing her closed, dark lashes. Her lips turning upward, and face smooth, she dreamed of their goats, and c…[Read more]
Eitan posted an update 5 years, 10 months ago

@tal

Oh. Now I understand how tactless and insulting I was. I’m so sorry if I insulted you or degraded your WIP in any way, I totally didn’t mean that. I ask your forgiveness.
Gracie replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan

I like all the reptiles, and their uses. And the prophet thing, and the judges. You have their history so well figured out!
Tal replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan

I, uh, never thought of it that way, but that might be a cool addition to the species. They just live in certain places around the world and the humans capture and domestication them for military purposes. At least in most cases. Some lucky few have them for personal travel.

@arindown Thank you!
Beth Darlene posted an update 5 years, 10 months ago

My SE writing family!

Siblings:
@kimlikesart My writing sister!
@thedarkninja03 My writing brother!
@purpleturtle My long lost brother!
@claire-h My long lost sister!

Parents:
@eitan My writing father who always has awesome critique!
Mother:

Aunts:
@katja-r My awesome aunt!
@arindown My awesome artist aunt!
@melodyjoy My aunt who loves animals
- Beth Darlene replied 5 years, 10 months ago
  
  Hopefully, I didn’t forget anyone! If you want to be part of my writing fam, just ask!
- Arindown (Gracie) replied 5 years, 10 months ago
  
  Haha! That’s such a cool idea, Beth!
  I’m still so honoured that you use my drawing as your profile.
  If you ever need drawing tips (even though I’m not very good), a cat to cuddle, or some ice-cream, you can run over to Aunty Arindown’s.😉
  - Beth Darlene replied 5 years, 10 months ago
    
    Haha, thank you, Aunty A! 😉
- Mel replied 5 years, 10 months ago
  
  Hey! Thanks so much Beth.
  ** GRINS** (..who loves animals? Aww thanks)
  so that makes you my writing niece? coooool
  - Beth Darlene replied 5 years, 10 months ago
    
    Yes, it does! lol
- Kimmi replied 5 years, 10 months ago
  
  Ah, gracias mi hermana (:
  - Beth Darlene replied 5 years, 10 months ago
    
    ¡De nada! 🙂
Arindown replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan Your Sandwellers sound pretty awesome! I like the idea of the reptiles and burrows, and judges. Do your people have weapons (in case of attack)? If so, what type do they use?
Tal replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan

Sure! I’ll just paste an excerpt from where one of my characters sees one.

The majestic creatures were a grandiose blend of bright green and smoky gray scales. Their bodies were hunched over like a roadrunner. A pointed, hawk-like head turned to gaze at him with dark, beady eyes. To compliment all of this, burnt orange feathers that…

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Arindown replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago

@tal Wow! I love your map and all the dragon things, and language, and swords.🤩 That is all so awesome. I especially love your way of naming things (because I just randomly name my places…😉).

@anne_the_noob14 Old trees, pirates, and bounty hunters? Sounds like someplace I would like to visit.😆 I love how your government system is set up. Also,…[Read more]
Kimmi replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan

(I’m not sure if you like music very much or not.)
Kimmi replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan

I also get what you said about not knowing the actual day you said, ‘I will follow Jesus.’ A lot of people at a church I go to can point out their ‘second birthday’, but I can’t.

I was baptized when I was eight, on Easter actually. I knew of Jesus then. I knew all the stories from the Bible. And I had no doubt that my parents had told the…[Read more]
Kimmi replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 10 months ago

@eitan

I just read your reply to my questions on here…and read your testimony. Wow.

What to say? I’m sorry about your family, and will be praying for them as well. Do you think it likely for people to throw stones?

My dog once almost caught a squirrel. But my sister saved it…to my dog’s sadness…

Here’s an old song I like, (I’m not sure…[Read more]
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