Eitan

Dakota replied to the topic A poem – I want to weep in the forum Poets 5 years, 6 months ago

@eitan Love this poem. Thank you for posting this! 🙂
Kimmi started the topic Unusual/Useful Words in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago

A Word Challenge!

You give one or more, unusual, useful words, and their definitions. Then tag people (if you want).

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Example:

Egad = Used as a mild exclamation. / An exclamation expressing exultation or surprise.

@zee @eitan @princessmk

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Please do not talk to each other very much! This thread is to be an interesting list, of…[Read more]
Sam M replied to the topic A poem – Alone in the night of darkness in the forum Poets 5 years, 6 months ago

@eitan I love this poem. 🙂 I specifically like, “O my Lord, heal my heart, and let your love be in me.” Thank you for sharing this!
Beth Darlene replied to the topic Campfire (I don’t really name my short stories lol) in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 6 months ago

@eitan @purpleturtle @claire-h @kimlikesart Don’t have to read, just thought I’d tag you! <3
Kimmi posted a new activity comment 5 years, 7 months ago

@eitan

Computer again…

I found this poem. (It has thee’s and thou’s) But has rymne and meter.
It is true.

Approach, my soul, the mercy–seat
Where JESUS answers prayer;
There humbly fall before his feet,
For none can perish there.
Thy promise is my only plea,
With this I venture nigh;
Thou callest burdened souls to thee,
And such, O LORD, a…[Read more]

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- Kimmi replied 5 years, 7 months ago
  
  (The poem without thee’s and thou’s)
  
  Approach, my soul, the mercy–seat
  Where JESUS answers prayer;
  There humbly fall before his feet,
  For none can perish there.
  Your promise is my only plea,
  With this I venture nigh;
  You call burdened souls to You,
  And such, O LORD, am I.
  And such, O LORD, am I.
  
  Bowed down beneath a load of sin,
  By Satan s…[Read more]
Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 5 years, 7 months ago

@eitan Yeah. By “over my head” I meant it is sometimes too advanced for me to follow. I was asking if you were able to understand all his minute points any better.
Gracie replied to the topic A poem – Your love and Your faithfulness in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago

That was beautiful @eitan .
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic A poem – Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago

@eitan This was beautiful, thank you. I’m sorry you went through this time, but it’s beautiful that you have come out the other side of this with hope in your heart and new strength in Jesus.

From a grammatical standpoint, I spotted one line… “There are no cold and horror – I do not shiver” should be “There is no cold and horror – I do not…[Read more]
Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 5 years, 7 months ago

@eitan I love Artifaxian, but he’s normally over my head. 😂 Can you manage to keep up with him?
Kimmi replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 5 years, 7 months ago

Wow @eitan .

That was amazingly helpful. Thank you!

Mermaids

Hmm….. *at first thinks it is definitely not to happen*…*then ideas come*….*mermaids might have a rather large part now*…

I will do what you suggest! So many good pointers…

Thank you again!
Zee replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 5 years, 7 months ago

Wow, you’ve put a whole lot of thought and time into this, @eitan. I’m impressed.
Kimmi replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 5 years, 7 months ago

@eitan

I have my first idea for a Fantasy novel!! (Yey!)

Your world/galaxy/universe, I have the feeling will end up Much better than mine. (: But, do you have any basic pointers/ideas on how to start building a world?
Sam M replied to the topic A poem – Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago

@eitan

Hi, Eitan! I really like your poem. I love the hope and truth that you pour into your writing.

Also, (because you’re really serious about grammar), I think you meant: I can know this for sure.

I look forward to reading anything else you post. 🙂
Gracie replied to the topic A poem – Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets 5 years, 8 months ago

@eitan

Beautiful Eitan! Truly. Thank you for sharing.

(:

There are no cold and horror – I do not shiver

I believe, (sense you asked), grammatically it should be ‘there is no cold and horror’.
- Eitan replied 5 years, 8 months ago
  
  Thank you!! And thanks for the critique 🙂
  Will edit if possible 🙂
  (Though grammatically, isn’t it plural?)
  - Kimmi replied 5 years, 8 months ago
    
    Good question. (I almost didn’t say anything because I don’t have any grammar rule I know to quote.) Then I mentioned it anyway… *wince* My brain, my /self/, why dost thou do this to thyself!!
    
    Anyways…
    Yes; it is plural.
    
    But ‘is’ /does/ go there. *Knowing I’m doing this horribly…I should ask my mother.*
    
    It sounds wrong with ‘are’. I’ve nev…[Read more]
  - Kimmi replied 5 years, 8 months ago
    
    (I hope this makes more sense to you, than it does to me…)
    
    ‘The subject is “there”.
    “There is” is the subject and verb.
    “cold and horror” is the direct object(s)’
    
    But, at least I know I’m not crazy…. in the complete oblivious sense of the word…
    
    Post Script: It was ‘Tal’ who answered my question…not my mother. (:
Kimmi replied to the topic Thoughts on Psalm 23 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 8 months ago

@zee

You’re welcome! Has school started for your boys yet?

@eitan

Aye, I did… (:

Wingiby-iggiby asked me to share more of this sort of stuff on SE…so I am. (:
Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 8 months ago

@eitan

Sounds fun! I’ve always wanted to learn other languages! Especially Greek and Chinese. I have no idea why. LOL

Eh. Not the greatest. We don’t get a lot of chances to interact. 🙁 But keep praying anyways. Hopefully I can reach them soon.

I’m glad your friends are doing well.

How is your writing? Have you been working on anything new?
Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 8 months ago

@eitan

🙂 The schools around here are opening up again soon(I think) our governor keeps changing his mind. 🙁 Of course we’re homeschooled so it doesn’t really affect us.

Arabic sounds like it would be a very confusing language to learn. I’m glad you enjoy it though.

I’ve been doing pretty good. My friends are doing okay. . . No real…[Read more]
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic It's Me… Again 😀 in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 8 months ago

@eitan – When you get to it, my favorite Psalm is Psalm 96 🙂

No snow? *gasp* Well, I’m not fond of winter. It’s my least favorite season. But I do love some pretty snow now and then. 😀 It does sound very beautiful there, though. I’d love to visit some day.

Oh, my question about cities… 😀 I just meant what was the city you lived in like, or…[Read more]
Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Hello from Israel! in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years, 8 months ago

@eitan

Hey! How have you been lately? What’s been going on? Anything new?
Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Another translated poem (: in the forum Poets 5 years, 8 months ago

@eitan

Sorry I just now saw this. This is beautiful! your poetry is so vivid and full of emotion. I love it! 🙂
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