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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 @christlover Good job, guys! I did notice that both of you (I’m sure accidentally) referred to Racleva with her actual name instead of the fake one she provided. Other than that, it was perfect.
@christlover, I like how you portrayed Caedon! He would definitely stand up for Runawin to protect her.
Sorry that Theseus looked so bad…
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Yes! 😀
Ok cool.
Omw I love it! I love her reaction to the humans and everything 😀 😀
@christlover Thanks! 🙂
@ariella-newheart Thanks! Yay!
Ooh… I like it!! And if Caedon can calm Runawin down, that’s awesome!
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Lucas stood facing the door, dagger held ready though he hoped he wouldn’t need to use it.…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Ooh, nice drawing! That is how I imagined the layout of the hall.
@christlover It’s perfectly okay if you changed the setup of the hall. The castle is very flexible (literally). It may appear different in the eyes of different characters. The goal of this topic is to help you get to know your characters by writing with them. If…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Mystery Biome in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@christlover I’m not sure about any mystery writers in this guild (as I’m only a substitute guild master), but if you’re looking for one on the general forum, I’m pretty sure Parker dabbles in mystery, if you want to hunt him down. 😉
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Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@ariella-newheart – Thank you! Yes, the throne room (and the whole empire in general) is very depressing. It’s necessary for some of the evil emperor’s most important plans (which will not be divulged just yet. ;)) Lol, yes, Racleva will be busy…funnily enough, there’s a scene similar to this in her story where she gives away her position by…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@christlover I’m working on kinda my thoughts on what the hall looks like right now. It may be a bit before I upload it cause I’m gonna have to play around with attaching pics. And I also might draw the library as well.
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@christlover You’re welcome! And honestly I dunno if you got the layout wrong, but some part of the way you described it didn’t fit with how I think of it. So we could both be wrong 😛
I’ll bet Elisha’s cool with the challenge 😀 (it’s awesome that Thesues also has powers… I feel sad now that none of my charries do… Just kidding lol :P…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 It understand completely. That makes Lucas’ character even more interesting to me. ISTJs are awesome, by the way!
@christlover ENTPs are cool too! And you’re welcome. 🙂 @steward-of-the-pen gave me the idea of making a character chat and I just ran with it. xD
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@christlover The only thing I’m noticing that MAYBE you got a little off is the layout of the hall. I’ll draw a picture of kinda how I envision it later, and Ariella will have to look at it too since it was her idea to begin with, but yeah. It’s not that big of a deal, but since you asked, that’s what I noticed.
Also, as just a general tip, watch…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@christlover Oh… I like Theseus! And I love that you have him attack Racleva! That’s gonna be awesome!! *snickers evilly*
I don’t think you left out anything… He seems very fleshed out and all.
To follow up Ariella’s comment about his personality type, what I did to figure out Lucas’ type (ISTJ-A) is I took the Myers Briggs personality test…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@christlover No, there’s no limit. 😀 Bringing one character in now and some others later is a good idea.
Theseus sounds like a cool character! I don’t think you neglected to describe anything about him…except maybe his personality type. Do you happen to know it? Reading his bio I would guess ESTP. 🙂
I like your entry with Theseus! The way…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@elisha-starquill Ooh… I like Racleva’s character so far! (Is it ra-CLEE-va?) And is she a wolf or a person? Or in-between? The way you describe her, she could be either.. This is gonna get interesting quite soon I see 😛 Lucas has zero magic in his world. The only difference is he lives in the mid-1800s, as opposed to present day. So I’m n…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart started the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
At the center of Parimi Alca, where all biomes and genres converge, a splendid structure stands high on a hill. A remnant of ages past, it has remained untouched from the very foundation of the world. The ancient stonework, a medley of different architecture, most resembles a Victorian castle. Enter through a door of weathered green wood and you…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Word war #6 in the forum Word Wars 6 years, 8 months ago
Meerkats!!
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Word War #5 in the forum Announcements 6 years, 9 months ago
Thanks for posting this, Catherine! You’re the best.…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Guild War: A Cultural Collision in the forum Announcements 6 years, 9 months ago
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Guild War: A Cultural Collision in the forum Announcements 6 years, 10 months ago
Hey guys! As per usual, I am late with this war notification, but we’ll see how we go. 😊
Prompt: Write a story in which two cultures clash
Word Limit: 2500
Time: Monday 19th (August) – Monday 2nd (of September) [Sorry for lateness. 😬]
The Judge: Possibly me? I’ll get back to you on that. 😂
For those who are new to Parimi Alca Guild Wa…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic I Am Alive, and Apologise in the forum Announcements 6 years, 10 months ago
Hey guys! In case you don’t remember me, I’m Jess. I’m actually your guildmaster, and I’m not dead!
First up, full apologies. A fair few major life things happened, and I was overwhelmed and basically shut myself in my room and just cried while trying to keep on top of things for basically a month. On that, prayer for dealing with deadlines and…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War : It's a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements 6 years, 11 months ago
GUYS GUYS GUYS GUYS!
GUESS WHAT???
WE WOOOON. Not the usual Honorable Mention for a change! 😝
Here is the doc if you want to check them out.
Jane was reeeeally impressed. She was super impressed, particularaly seeing that I sent her a message a day or so before saying, “ACK. THERE’S A WAR AND I DON’T EVEN KNOW WHAT THE PARIMIS ARE DOING.”…[Read more]
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