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@christlover The only thing I’m noticing that MAYBE you got a little off is the layout of the hall. I’ll draw a picture of kinda how I envision it later, and Ariella will have to look at it too since it was her idea to begin with, but yeah. It’s not that big of a deal, but since you asked, that’s what I noticed.

Also, as just a general tip, watch your use of “it’s” versus “its.” LOTS of people get it wrong, and I understand lol because it really doesn’t make sense at first, but it does after you think about it. “It’s” is a contraction of “it is.” “Its” is possessive. Which seems weird at first, but you wouldn’t say “the dog wagged it is tail,” would you? Nope. You’d say “the dog wagged its tail.”

So here, what you actually wrote is this: “He sprang up from where he lay, pulling his sword from it is scabbard as he did so.”

(Please don’t feel like I’m trying to make you feel bad or anything… I have a habit of correcting people’s grammar whenever I can.. And anybody, feel free to correct me if you see anything I say that’s wrong! I’m not perfect either!!)