Urwen Starial

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@naiya-dyani And Part Three!

As she tipped back the flask and set it aside, her eye caught a glimpse of Kiet’s face, pinched with pain. She winced as she selected a small cloth from her now-open kit. No matter how necessary this was to heal his wound, she k…[Read more]

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The next part @dakota and I wrote!

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Cell 860, 861, 862 . . .

Megyn winced as they passed cell after cell. The prisoners here seemed so. . . empty. Like souls living in death, and yet alive. Most didn’t even glance at them as they passed. The few tha…[Read more]

@dakota and @naiya-dyani I liked the new part. Would it work with what you have planed if Pasha was left outside? I didn’t see you mention him, inside so I just assumed he was outside. I’m starting work on his next part tonight, but I can change it if I need to.

@urwen-starial Where is Era? If you don’t mind I was going to have Pasha meet up with…[Read more]

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Hope you all enjoy!

All of the Pieces
All of my pieces I’d scattered o’er
The cracks in the surface of my stone heart floor
All of my days were lost so empty
Then You came and…[Read more]

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Okay, peeps, @naiya-dyani  and I have been working on what happens next with Megyn, Kiet and Kedori . . . and here is part one. Hope this is good. 🙂 (dashes indicate POV switch

As the young woman walked past the gates, Kedori sucked in a breath through…[Read more]

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Here’s the newest part for Chance:

Chance picked his violin up from where he had laid it on the floor. As he looked at it his lips quivered and a tear dropped onto it’s shining wood. He knelt down beside the violin case and laid the violin careful inside. A…[Read more]

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Good job! I like it!

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This one I have been trying to finish for over a year now. Critque and enjoy!

Resolutions

I wrote my list of resolutions
Not to create my own solutions
I want to live like my…[Read more]

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Logan:

“I’m sorry.” Rhioe apologized. “I shouldn’t be asking you about this.”

“No! It’s fine Rhioe. Thank you so much for caring . . . for asking,” Logan was silent for a moment as he carried her, “You remember when we first met and- and- I locked up?”

@urwen-starial Hey, these are both really good! The best thing you could do to improve is to keep practicing. If you feel stuck as to how to practice, or what to practice, we can dialogue about that! But otherwise, I don’t think there’s anything else I have to say, haha.

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Wow! those are great! I really like them. Good job.

I especially like the one of dark.

@urwen-starial Ohhh those are amazing!! 😀 The main thing I noticed with the first one is that the top of the ponytail could have used a bit more shading, but aside from that–I’m not great at art critique, and they look wonderful to me!!

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Merry Christmas!!

My Christmas Prayer
All the lights are hung, twinkling
Like a million stars glittering all over the walls
By the window the tree is shining
Crowned with a…[Read more]

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Time for another . . .

If my guy characters were roommates:

Tai to Gerik: you’re a terrible roommate and nobody likes you

Dari: Let’s try phrasing it this way: “When you do this, it makes me feel this.” 🙂

Tai: Ok. . . When you. . . live here. . . it makes me feel. . . a…[Read more]

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@naiya-dyani ( It’s okay! Hey, would you mind if we started writing together, like in Google docs? That might doing the next parts with Kiet a little easier.)

Megyn nodded. Yes, I’m ready. Let’s go. she signed. She turned and walked through the gate.

As the Tower came into view, she…[Read more]

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Korynth, Iyan, and Jin:

Light was barely glowing in the eastern sky as Korynth and Iyan reached the tower with their prisoner. The trek to the tower had been a long, cold one and Korynth was glad for Iyan’s sake that it was over. Just the same he hated every time…[Read more]

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Logan & Rhioe:

Logan blinked. He wasn’t expecting the question. What am I supposed to say to her? He opened his mouth to speak, but no words came. He was grateful that she noticed and cared enough to ask. But could he really let her see the things that hurt him? T…[Read more]