Story Embers | Zachary Holbrook | Mentions https://storyembers.org/members/toklaham-veruzia/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Zachary Holbrook. Sat, 06 Jun 2026 19:54:30 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 af523eb94c3a7f141b854aa20c9cdc5a Daeus Lamb started the topic Word War XXI in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/91597/ Fri, 23 Apr 2021 17:32:39 -0400 Great job, word warriors!

Group #3: 18,072

Group #2: 7,213

Group #1: 18.072

And the individual record for this month was 8,792, by @corkybookworm

@toklaham-veruzia @hope-ann @seekjustice @hope-mcclellan @r-m-archer @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @gabrielwoods @kari-karast @fairfay @the-golden-light @corkybookworm @abigail-rebekah @cassidy @millen…[Read more]

]]> 3 294353b0ab39ed466a12bff5f86fdea6 Claire_Tucker replied to the topic Muddling through the murky middle... in the forum Plotting https://storyembers.org/activity/p/90867/ Fri, 02 Apr 2021 14:51:47 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia I’m sorry for taking an age to reply to you! Thank you–your reply is very helpful, especially as my one character has a negative arc.

]]> 0 2c94b4043e92cc3424a40d75104ece91 Daeus Lamb started the topic Word War XX Winners! in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/89959/ Wed, 10 Mar 2021 21:49:58 -0400 Hi friends!

Our word war champions have emerged. In a stunning victory, word war group #3 takes the lead with 14,577 words, group 2 following with 7,358, and group 1 strangely no-show.

The individual with the highest wordcount was @joelle-stone with 6,841 words!

Great job everyone who participated.

@toklaham-veruzia @hope-ann @seekjustice @hope…[Read more]

]]> 7 e4a2be4476879100f55f1fa6a91a5adc Zee replied to the topic Let's Share our Websites in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/87072/ Wed, 09 Dec 2020 16:25:54 -0400 Very cool, @toklaham-veruzia and @naiya-dyani! Now I’m going to follow you both.

]]> 0 336332583993e99c7126d16d7dd78e76 𝙼𝚊𝚢𝚊 𝙹𝚘𝚎𝚕𝚕𝚎 replied to the topic God in a fantasy universe in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/87048/ Tue, 08 Dec 2020 20:32:35 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia Makes sense. I still agree with what @r-m-archer said earlier, about how the pre-redemption OT God was still personal. Either way, you have a massive task ahead and I look forward to seeing what you do. Is The Lore of Yore currently pre- or post-redemption?

Ahhh, Till We Have Faces. I don’t think anyone can match Lewis’…[Read more]

]]> 0 03b6736079a149ad2af4db538c5ba19b 𝙼𝚊𝚢𝚊 𝙹𝚘𝚎𝚕𝚕𝚎 replied to the topic Your Story's Big Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/86912/ Sat, 05 Dec 2020 21:19:21 -0400 @sam-m “What is the difference between justice and revenge?” is probably my favorite of those… I would love to see how you answer that!

@zee “What’s going to happen next?” is a very relatable question XD

@toklaham-veruzia What does the talking sword want?

]]> 0 c956b5d5be4797de231b2401c62f5d37 𝙼𝚊𝚢𝚊 𝙹𝚘𝚎𝚕𝚕𝚎 replied to the topic God in a fantasy universe in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/86911/ Sat, 05 Dec 2020 21:16:33 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia So. Reading through your initial comment made me want to read your pre-Redemption world stories very much. Like, I understand how that could be difficult to write, but if you could pull it off… wow, that would be amazing.

But if you really want to go with the post-Redemption world… you’ve got some really good feedback here…[Read more]

]]> 0 8a72ab9919c4a4c50d3c62495b0a19e6 Rusted Knight replied to the topic God in a fantasy universe in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/86864/ Sat, 05 Dec 2020 02:41:58 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia

There was this one book that my mother read out loud to us a long time ago. I think it was about Luke before he was a Christian? At one point in the story, he ends up with Magi how tell him about God. Something that stuck out to me was that they did not know everything but had enough to know that someone would come. To that end,…[Read more]

]]> 0 cc6b9657e775fa37478826531aa6014a Arindown replied to the topic God in a fantasy universe in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/86790/ Thu, 03 Dec 2020 20:24:08 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia I’ve often wondered about this subject too…my favorite writing of a personable God in a fantasy world is the Wingfeather Saga by Andrew Peterson. Although his characters portray different parts of the Redemptive story throughout the series (forgiveness, protection, self-sacrifice, etc.), Peterson also has a figure called the…[Read more]

]]> 0 3d6597d2b2646b38260022f7574c6476 Zee replied to the topic God in a fantasy universe in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/86778/ Thu, 03 Dec 2020 15:26:10 -0400 Great questions, @toklaham-veruzia! Very thought-provoking. First of all, I have to congratulate you on your ambition and perseverance.

You say you don’t want to “cut-and-paste” Christianity into your fantasy world, but the fact is, if your created characters are going to have a personal relationship with a God who actually joined them, lived…[Read more]

]]> 0 6ad745ecfd202d17d759f182128d7b10 Daeus Lamb started the topic Word War XIX Winners! in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/86210/ Fri, 13 Nov 2020 13:18:11 -0400 Hey guys,

We had some insane competition this week. Some people cranked out more words in a week than I thought possible. 😂

Let me present you with your winners.

Group 1: 54,882
Group 2: 21,329
Group 3: 14, 860

And the individual with the most words? @the-golden-light at 22,828. 😱

Great job…[Read more]

]]> 0 3e10a3b688857cc3325b17b165ddb663 Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Word War XIII Winners! in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/85619/ Sat, 17 Oct 2020 16:38:25 -0400 @dakota OOoooohhhh. HOLD ON EVERYBODY. Thanks to Dakota, I spotted an error. I actually calculated some results from last word war.

Here are the new calculations:

Word war group 1: 10,810
Word war group 2: No participation
Word war group 3: 6,567

Individual with the highest word count: @fairfay with 6,191!

Sorry about the confusion, f…[Read more]

]]> 0 e47c7fa8ee9dcf3f101a11e93a6d92c1 Daeus Lamb started the topic Word War XIII Winners! in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/85608/ Sat, 17 Oct 2020 13:31:26 -0400 Hello! Ye mighty writers, I bring ye news of your victors.

Word war group 1: 10,810
Word war group 2: 12,306
Word war group 3: 9,768

And the personal highest word count? @dakota at 6,538!

@law0413 @mayajoelle @dakota @pookiemonster @trallion @emgc @gabrielwoods @theswordinthebook @millennium @writercatherine @naiya-dyani @cazadoradelaluna @eden-…[Read more]

]]> 0 1f4936f80b0c97fac9fc5aa2d74c9c6e Arindown replied to the topic My last story (for a while) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/81343/ Sat, 27 Jun 2020 23:29:48 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia

Thanks, maybe I’ll look into Havok. Sounds cool.

Wow, that is a LOT of words for a book. Mine won’t be that long…but it’s my first novel, so I don’t feel like I need too many.

]]> 0 e4b6b481b2bba019be61ebf02b9838df Daeus Lamb started the topic archiving the guilds in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/81268/ Fri, 26 Jun 2020 01:45:57 -0400 Heads up. We’re moving the guilds to the archives. You’ll still be able to access old posts, but you won’t be able to make new ones.

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler

@kari-karast @i-david

@donna-darling @kr-lalonde

@the-golden-light @jennythefaun

@bekah @SamBerg0

@Naomi-…[Read more]

]]> 0 a9e0e35556f7a4f58d287ad9104fa7d8 Arindown replied to the topic My last story (for a while) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/81256/ Thu, 25 Jun 2020 19:12:16 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia

I went and read your story. Good job. I really liked it.

I have written a ton of flash-fiction, but I’ve never polished or published any of it. Maybe I should look into it.

Just curious, how long do you plan for your WIP to be? I saw over on Word Wars that you had written over 17,000 words during one battle. That’s really…[Read more]

]]> 0 3c374a439bc5f0e89f80e6bfbce957b8 Maya Joelle posted an update: @toklaham-veruzia Hey! Just wanted to say hi. I joined SE a […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/81042/ Sat, 20 Jun 2020 17:11:15 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia Hey! Just wanted to say hi. I joined SE a couple days ago and found your profile somehow (I’m used to a directory of all users, since that’s how it is on YDubs…). Maddie and I have been texting but I find it a little weird to always be saying things like “does Zachary like Story Embers?” (after seeing you in the background of…[Read more]

]]> 2 add08b7befd270a21e6ea9014261a9f9 Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/80596/ Thu, 11 Jun 2020 00:18:06 -0400 @elven Sorry I kinda laughed when I saw that. . . @toklaham-veruzia is also an INTJ and his manuscript is currently slated to be, like, 130k words. XD Though I’m assuming you meant message wise.

And yep, I was kind of surprised how many were on here! Several of them actually helped me out with my INTJ main character.

Oh boy. . . my story.…[Read more]

]]> 0 781689d5e796ddbda75e71536138fc3b Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic Word War XI Winners! in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/80580/ Wed, 10 Jun 2020 19:49:24 -0400 Great job everyone…and well done Team 1 😉

@toklaham-veruzia Wow…that’s a lot!!!

]]> 0 9ae4efc8714638fe5a5664c9049d9ab0 luciusbraun replied to the topic Word War XI Winners! in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/80555/ Wed, 10 Jun 2020 15:25:33 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia congrats on your word count! That’s really impressive. 🙂

Hooray for team 1! You made it! This time… *cue evil laughter

But, seriously though, good job to ALL teams and writers! Can’t wait for our next battle!

]]> 0 83445713efce702d46ea5268e12ec5d8 Dakota replied to the topic Word War XI Winners! in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/80552/ Wed, 10 Jun 2020 14:42:37 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia Congrats! 🙂

 

And great job, everybody!!

]]> 0 9daaeb6e309787de34b1f813334ade31 Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Word War XI Winners! in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/80544/ Wed, 10 Jun 2020 13:39:24 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia *facepalm* Why am I not surprised? *claps* Well done, Zachary.

And great job, everyone! 😀

]]> 0 99dbb1b3f25fb3f9003b0015c59df7b6 Daeus Lamb started the topic Word War XI Winners! in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/80542/ Wed, 10 Jun 2020 13:32:40 -0400 Ladies and gentlemen, it was a tremendous fight. Such heavy blows were struck on each side that I thought none would survive. But they have all pressed through, and one team has emerged the winner.

I present you the scores.

Team 1: 36,480
Team 2: 18,871
Team 3: 8,964
Individual winner: @toklaham-veruzia at 17,251!

@toklaham-veruzia @hope-ann @se…[Read more]

]]> 1 a9befb522e43f6070b67b3dca20f2c63 Daeus Lamb started the topic Word War X winners! in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79144/ Thu, 14 May 2020 21:42:15 -0400 @millennium @writercatherine @phoenix @naiya-dyani @toklaham-veruzia @hope-ann @seekjustice @hope-mcclellan @r-m-archer @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @gabrielwoods @kari-karast @fairfay @the-golden-light @corkybookworm @abigail-rebekah @cassidy @dakota @pookiemonster @trallion @emgc @gabrielwoods @theswordinthebook

Hey, guys! The word war for May…[Read more]

]]> 0 1aac131e1d6e2b46ec7dcbba73f368c9 Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Characters with other nationalities in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/activity/p/77931/ Mon, 27 Apr 2020 23:50:32 -0400 @hope-ann

Ooh, perfect! I’m doing some of this in my own story (which is fantasy, granted, but does have other races in it).

I think the first thing to keep in mind is that you will almost never be able to avoid offending everyone. There’s always going to be someone who takes something the wrong way. So don’t freak out too much to start with,…[Read more]

]]> 0 eb4639b062117cef07219fbb56676915 JennytheFaun replied to the topic The Promise of Jesse Woods Week #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/77208/ Wed, 08 Apr 2020 23:37:54 -0400 @taylorclogston I would have expected most of the book to take place in ’72, which @toklaham-veruzia confirmed. I think I’ll have to watch the rest of the story play out before I can say for sure whether I’m a fan of that technique (starting the book on the edge of the climax) or not. Like Daeus said, it did get me involved right away. The…[Read more]

]]> 0 f821439cade6542920ade5a058dd03ac Daeus Lamb replied to the topic The Promise of Jesse Woods Week #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/77172/ Tue, 07 Apr 2020 21:54:24 -0400 @caseybold @taylorclogston @toklaham-veruzia @allertingthbs @jennythefaun

I’ve honestly never thought about the pros and cons of revealing or hiding aspects of a character early on in a story. As I’m thinking about it, it seems the one thing I’d avoid is the completely mysterious character.

In Six of Crows, all the character are introduced with…[Read more]

]]> 0 0748aaaf4e217fbdcd32d7592510e07c Taylor Clogston posted an update: @toklaham-veruzia I read the newest post on your blog, and […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76743/ Fri, 27 Mar 2020 00:03:45 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia I read the newest post on your blog, and wanted to suggest you watch I Am Mother if you have access to Netflix. It’s a pretty different movie about what it means to be a mother, sort of. And it has fantastic practical effects. Anyway, if you watch it, let me know what you thought!

]]> 0 3f14932f63fa06323536624982ed48be Taylor Clogston replied to the topic A fading life. A dangerous gift. A desperate hope. in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76720/ Thu, 26 Mar 2020 17:06:56 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia I’m ashamed to say I wasn’t expecting much when I saw it was fantasy flash fic, but that was great. Good job evoking worldbuilding without making me feel like you were just using this as a teaser for a full book.

]]> 0 38b757b5520500204016ab930a5c3d93 Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Naiya's Art Attempts in the forum Art Critique https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76549/ Sat, 21 Mar 2020 19:32:11 -0400 This is @toklaham-veruzia:

]]> 0 63df47a1e3bd3fe65d8feb4440b7b7e9 Daeus Lamb started the topic Word war IX winners in the forum Word Wars https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76457/ Fri, 20 Mar 2020 13:16:54 -0400 @dakota @pookiemonster @trallion @emgc @gabrielwoods @theswordinthebook

@toklaham-veruzia @hope-ann @seekjustice @hope-mcclellan @r-m-archer @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @gabrielwoods @kari-karast @fairfay @the-golden-light @corkybookworm @abigail-rebekah

@millennium @writercatherine @phoenix

Hey, guys! The word war has finished. Peace i…[Read more]

]]> 0 27e9b7a8acea31e69b915a21c325470c Daeus Lamb replied to the topic The Songkiller's Synopsis!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76426/ Thu, 19 Mar 2020 19:47:36 -0400 Dilemma: I’ve got conflicting feedback on my blurb. Some say I should change it, others that I shouldn’t.

I’m in search of opinionated people to help clear me out of this muddle.

Here’s what I had:

In the beginning, the Songkiller sang chaos into the fabric of the world. Now, he’s returning to finish his dark symphony…

Exton hunts to red…[Read more]

]]> 0 705c2057889f308653ac913975a87f59 JennytheFaun replied to the topic Email List in the forum Knaphollow Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76180/ Sat, 14 Mar 2020 20:06:16 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia Yeah, I found out how to make a link to a signup right after asking most people I know if they’d like to subscribe…the joys of being a beginner XP Do you want to guinea pig this one? http://eepurl.com/gV_jbr

Lol, yep! I’ll put that on my writer resume.

]]> 0 bee628e6ea6927c42aac4ee38e9ffedb JennytheFaun started the topic Email List in the forum Knaphollow Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76106/ Fri, 13 Mar 2020 14:32:03 -0400 @samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler @kari-karast

@i-david @donna-darling @kr-lalonde @the-golden-light @toklaham-veruzia @maddie-jay @ryo-wildfire

How are you guys? I wish I were better at keeping up with y’all. I wanted to let the Knaplingers know that I’m starting an email…[Read more]

]]> 1 44067088902974ce99e11c27d7ebe966 Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Resisting invasion -- edibly. 'Foodpocalypse' releases today! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76059/ Thu, 12 Mar 2020 00:35:33 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia Congrats on your repeated publishing! (and I’m happy I finally got to one of these before it was too late).

Your story made me chuckle, so points for that =P It feels exactly like the kind of stuff I wrote in high school.

]]> 0 9391649952540e42f0d71234602988cc Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Is Knaphollow on life support? in the forum Knaphollow Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/74330/ Wed, 19 Feb 2020 13:01:27 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia @kr-lalonde

Hey. . . are we still even alive?

]]> 0 afcf55448f72342b0afed64a613e349d Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Advanced Writers in the forum Writing Level & Journey Plans Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72512/ Thu, 30 Jan 2020 13:19:38 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia

Yeah, revising can be difficult!

]]> 0 adaf16370b80bdaeed3179918b0a534b Maddie Morrow replied to the topic Introducing GROUPS in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72432/ Wed, 29 Jan 2020 19:54:26 -0400 Hey guys! Check this out. This might help fill some of the voids some of you have been missing in the guilds. Be sure to sign up for a word war group if you plan to continue participating.

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde…[Read more]

]]> 0 1ce8d50399c6d40ed621efa6c0688a39 Daeus Lamb started the topic Introducing GROUPS in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72157/ Mon, 27 Jan 2020 15:42:02 -0400 Hey SE people!

We’ve launched a cool new feature on the forum called groups.

You can find them in the nav bar like so:

Groups are hubs for writers to gather around something they share in common. They include a Facebook-like feed and most of them also include their own forums.

So far there are three types of groups:
1. Word war…[Read more]

]]> 0 12c34c3328ab80aa951dc5027c4970ba Maddie Morrow replied to the topic Is Knaphollow on life support? in the forum Knaphollow Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/71554/ Mon, 13 Jan 2020 13:57:32 -0400 Hey guys. I’m sorry it’s been so dead around here. Definitely a large portion my fault. Kind of hard to keep a guild running when the guild master falls off the face of the earth.

However, it has come to my attention recently that this is not relegated to Knaphollow only. A couple of the guild’s are completely without leaders, most are floun…[Read more]

]]> 0 fa9e511d73dbdbe08a35cb9bcb189e60 JennytheFaun replied to the topic Six-Word Stories in the forum Knaphollow Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/71523/ Sat, 11 Jan 2020 18:35:12 -0400 Well guys, I made it to round two of The Writer Games! (🤣🥳) Thanks for your help! Now I need to submit a 100 word story. I would love some feedback from y’all! And if it’s just not that good, please be honest and let me know. I still have time to try again. Thanks…[Read more]

]]> 0 81bc8327e65410e14bcd7335413164b5 Caseybold replied to the topic Strength in Numbers in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/71508/ Sat, 11 Jan 2020 05:02:13 -0400 @deeprun I’m so glad you took this on! Your ideas are awesome, and I’m really excited to start the experiment. I sent you an email so you’ll have my address 😀

@morreafirebird Google hangouts is a brilliant suggestion for chatting with each other! I also have some stuff that’s ready for critique, but would be very happy to start with whomever :D…[Read more]

]]> 0 ce0ff91f77c5e28427be4f5e274785e9 JennytheFaun started the topic Six-Word Stories in the forum Knaphollow Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/71277/ Fri, 03 Jan 2020 02:47:50 -0400 I’m in The Writer Games (the one Mariposa has mentioned on her blog, if y’all read that) and I need to submit a six-word story by Monday. I thought I’d have a hard time coming up with one since I don’t have experience with micro-stories, but actually the problem was too many ideas! It would help me so much if some Knaplingers could:

1. Comment…[Read more]

]]> 0 ce90ab782a09f95c3c6471dca62975df JennytheFaun replied to the topic Is Knaphollow on life support? in the forum Knaphollow Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/71250/ Thu, 02 Jan 2020 01:08:53 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia Same here! What if Knaplingers set up some critique/beta reading exchanges/partnerships? Would that help y’all?

]]> 0 21ae2936c5c7cc36a64863a8c1543ecd Sarah Inkdragon replied to the topic A Small Experiment Regarding Those Most Fascinating Characters in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/activity/p/70501/ Wed, 11 Dec 2019 03:32:39 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia
Ooh, good choices! To be honest, I like the MC(blanking on his name rn XD) from A Silent Voice better, but I relate to him a bit more as well. 😉 Shoko is also a grand character, however.

@seekjustice

It is truly a fascinating topic, isn’t it? I find it rather amusing that despite the fact nearly everyone likes a rogue-ish type…[Read more]

]]> 0 9ccffa3d3f9a1aab8068a3e34908e340 Livi Ryddle replied to the topic You've read that too! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/70432/ Mon, 09 Dec 2019 04:42:58 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia *grins* They actually don’t. One character writes haikus a LOT and he puts one at the beginning of each chapter. They’re usually really funny, and have at least SOMEthing to do with what’s in the chapter. So that particular chapter has to do with a prophecy, and someone made the comment to “check the spam folder”. If I’m…[Read more]

]]> 0 a630f291e0cea66ab8234ca3696af5b4 Naiya Dyani replied to the topic KAPEEFERS! The Return of the Kingdom?? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/70353/ Fri, 06 Dec 2019 01:17:54 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia Yeah, I was wondering the same thing! It kind of confused me since they seemed fairly similar (I mean, excepting the differences @morreafirebird stated) and involve so many of the same people. I’m not sure exactly why Story Embers came about as a separate entity. I’m sure there’s a reason, though! 😀

@josiah @daeus-lamb @hope-ann…[Read more]

]]> 0 f6b62a450cf611fc19a5ac912ffcbde0 K.M. Small replied to the topic KAPEEFERS! The Return of the Kingdom?? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/70314/ Wed, 04 Dec 2019 18:24:25 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia yes, there definitely is. I think the difference lies in the target audience of each website. Story Embers is aimed at Christian writers in general, with the mission to help them better fulfill that calling as a Christian storyteller. Kingdom Pen was aimed at young Christian writers, below 25. While there was a focus on learning…[Read more]

]]> 0 f05ef7248ab845ebcc3c23ac700ebfce Snapper replied to the topic KAPEEFERS! The Return of the Kingdom?? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/70304/ Wed, 04 Dec 2019 03:04:53 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia I would say so. I’ve always had a deep connection to Kingdom Pen, though a large part of that is probably due to the fact that I grew up as a writer there. There are other differences, some minor, some larger, but imo, they aren’t the same thing. Yes, there are similarities, but Kingdom Pen is very unique.

]]> 0 611c81ef8890d8ff673d408bfd913d45 Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Who wants coaching? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/70289/ Tue, 03 Dec 2019 21:27:02 -0400 @toklaham-veruzia Thanks for letting me know. I would prefer to do the session with someone this week if I can find someone who would volunteer.

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