Bethany

@this-is-not-an-alien

LOL Liorah actually stopped screaming to pet the dog! Ferran seems to be a very good influence XD

LOL! ‘Shut up, pet the dog’ is a fairly dependable technique to calm Liorah down XD

@sparrowhawke

Sorry it was so long. And the writing is pretty bad.

Don’t worry! This isn’t a prose competition, you did great 😉 And make…[Read more]

Ack! Dang I am late! XD

Seventeen! A year older than Ehud so she can momfriend him lol.

Hi ya’ll @irishcelticredflowercrown @sparrowhawke WELCOME ABOARD!!!
LOL Liorah actually stopped screaming to pet the dog! Ferran seems to be a very good influence XD

That’s not the memory I’d have wanted to start with.
But it’s over now, I guess for now…[Read more]

@jasmine

*Knocks you over with a hug* Jasmine! So nice to see you again! I missed you!

@sparrowhawke

Ok, I’ll try! (Again, please forgive me if my posts are extremely sporadic. I may need to drop out at any moment.)

No worries! Can’t wait to meet your character, he seems really cool!

Ferran

Liorah’s extended gripe at the castle was i…[Read more]

Ok! Critique @sparrowhawke!
1. Is there anything that stood out to you as intriguing about this scene?
The strange writing was very interesting how it was integrated into the plot/characters. It had plenty of mystery and promise attached to it and made me want to keep listening.

2. What would you say the mood was of this scene?
Tense, but also…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

Fantastic! I’d love to see both of them if you feel like you can handle two! You’re allowed to have two in at a time, and then you can develop relationships as well.

To start, you can just write a quick description and as much backstory/context as you feel is necessary. (Neasa, could you do this as well? It makes it a bit easier…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

@rusted-knight

@jasmine

@mischievous-thwapling

Heya, y’all! We’re running out of people, especially since everyone seems to be busy right about now. I’m going to tag a couple of people who might be interested: (Read as: I’m tagging people randomly XD)

@irishcelticredflowercrown  @writergirl101 (I don’t remember, but I…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke
Oh CONGRATULATIONS @SPARROWHAWKE! YAY YOU’RE THE FIRST ONE AND YOUR STORY IS FASCINATING!

Well I can’t wait to try my hand at it but I’ll probably still be a few days XD. I think I’ve finally found a good laptop in my price range and I’m just waiting for my mom to have a chance to look at it and approve it before we order it…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

Hello,

Here, at last, is my responses to the scene questions.

Scene Questions

1)      Is there anything that stood out to you as intriguing about this scene?

There is a familiar conflict of wills in this scene. The young, promising acolyte (Malar) challenging an authority figure (Crin), frustrated with what they view is slow…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

As promised, please find my humble offering to you of a dramatic reading of your very fine work.

Your MP3 file is linked below:

Dramatic Audio rendition of SparrowHawkes Entry_06-25-2021

I will provide a comment review in a follow-up post.
Thank you again for playing along and being such a good sport!

May you have a very blessed evening!

@sparrowhawke

Wow! Thank you for your entry!

I will provide my feedback a little later because of present time constraints but thank you for being the first brave one.

You may have heard it said, “Fortune favors the bold”, so, since you are the first, I am going to do something for you, that I could not do sustainably for others.

I am going to…[Read more]

Here is my try:

Moniker: @sparrowhawke

Details: 1143 words, 6:22 min. audio

Audio: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1P9S15_W8C7LZtrX5J8i17-bhapBR8fnV/view?usp=sharing

Text:

The steel is smooth under my fingers, the blade as sharp as my tongue. Words written in the Forgotten Language, the Eling, curl around the handle, carved into the ivory.…[Read more]