Sarah Inkdragon

@sarah-inkdragon

Ooh your story reminds me of one of my favourite shows, Psycho-Pass, which is a little similar in premise (a science-fiction psychological thriller featuring a seemingly perfect society with the main characters being the defenders of the status quo). I’ll just put the synopsis here for reference in case it is useful. From what I…[Read more]

@sarah-inkdragon

Hmmmm… it’s difficult. I just had a look at the Fahrenheit 451 blurb and it seems to rely on the fact that the audience already somewhat knows what’s going.

Guy Montag is a fireman. In his world, where television rules and literature is on the brink of extinction, firemen start fires rather than put them out. His job is to…

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@sarah-inkdragon

Jethro, Moses’s father in law, according to Google 😉

and also John Ronald Reuel, yes.   )

I just guessed because I once named a character Reuel after Tolkien.

As for how to make it sound generic but also interesting… I’m not really sure without employing satire 😀

@morreafirebird Wow those are beautiful! I really need to start painting again…

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Well guys what’s the week ahead look like for you?

For me…

— Get prepared for concert this weekend 

— So practice, practice, practice!

— Read

— Write a little bit at least

— Beta-read

— Keep up with math

@deeprun @michelle @bree-dawn @tinuviel @ta…[Read more]

@sarah-inkdragon

It strikes me as sci-fi with heavy dystopian themes. I haven’t read Scythe by Neal Shusterman, but the blurbs sound similar.

It does sound interesting, though I think the prose could be tightened in a few areas, as it reads a bit ramblingly. Some bits “truth – real truth – has been accepted in all four corners of the globe.” I t…[Read more]

@sarah-inkdragon

I think it’s not bad. You’ve got the situation and problem of the main plot there but I would recommend providing more details and context to give more clarity as to the type of story this is and catch the reader’s interest.

From the blurb, it seems to be an adventure story. I would not have known that it is a sci-fi because to…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting I can relate. >.< Hopefully things will slow down a bit for you this week. 🙂

@morreafirebird That’s awesome! Now I wanna paint. XD

@michelle Great. 😀 Things have been going pretty well… Didn’t write much, but I’ve been able to read a lot. 🙂

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Hey guys how goes it? What goals do you have in mind for the week?

This week…[Read more]

@bree-dawn @caserola @michael_stanton @trallion @catwing @hope-ann @allison-grace@emgc @enu @princess-foo @seekjustice @karthmin @mlbolangerauthor @lady-frosttongue @sarah-inkdragon @devastate-lasting @the-inkspiller @filewriter @sarah-narnathron @ajaj2000 @warrenluther04 @lydia-writes @rose-noblescroll @thetessinator@briannajean @norella-novik @mo…[Read more]

@sarah-inkdragon Yeah. . . it seems to be an on-an-off problem.

@sarah-inkdragon I don’t think you’ll find many social theorists who agree that social class can be described as a difference in belief systems. If someone talks about class, you can assume they are talking about vertical stratification in social standing, not about what elements separate my moral and political views from yours.

I think you hit…[Read more]

@sarah-inkdragon Yeah, Warden, Kayla Skywriter, and I all had that problem, too! Warden set up a thread for that.

@devastate-lasting Good to hear! Hopefully the homework hasn’t been too overwhelming. 🙁

@sageinthemeadow Glad I could be of help! XD

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Okay new week, new goals. Mine are:

• Do more organizing
• Draw a little bit each day
• Write half an hour/day
• Finish all of my history assignments…starting to get behind…
• Read as much as I am able

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So I posted the blurb on Realm Makers. Verdict was it didn’t have a clear enough plot! (People also wanted a little stronger sense of the world it was set in.)

I’ve buckled down and tried a rewrite. What do you think?

@taylorclogston @hope-mcclellan @kayla-skywriter @cassandraia @snapper @sarah-inkdragon @noahlitle @literatureforthelight @wordsmi…[Read more]

@morreafirebird I hope to finish the middle part of my short story(it’s my very first short story, I’m actually going to finish lol, I jump from story to story)  So I’m really…[Read more]

@kelly-lundgren Glad to hear it!

@sageinthemeadow Oh, I’m sorry about that. >.< My goals are off to a fairly good start, I think, all things considered. I’ve been staying away from movies/video games/most technology and it’s really helped me to get my focus straightened out and back on track. 😉 I hope that this first week of 2020 has been…[Read more]

@the-fledgling-artist

I’m going to have to echo @sarah-inkdragon here. 😛

I’ve finally had time to write a full-length novel for the first time in a year. And essentially, I didn’t have an outline. I knew the plot points. I knew vaguely how my character would change. I knew the first scene. So I just wrote that, and by the end, I had a vague…[Read more]

My cousin was making some fanart of Deku from My Hero Academia the other day and inspired me because Deku’s a cinnamon roll. 😀 @sarah-inkdragon @scarlet-immortalized @jenwriter17 don’t ask me how I know you’ve watched/enjoy MHA/BNHA because it involved ridiculously deep forum perusing I did a while back and makes me sound like an even more…[Read more]