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@lin

I don’t think there needs to explicitly be a God figure in every story. My goal in my writing is more of to write stories that challenge the many common assumptions people have about life in this world (i.e. that money/romance/science/whatever idol they have will make them happy or solve their problems) to encourage non-believers to think…[Read more]

@sarah-inkdragon

Haha I actually love writing female characters! I think it’s because I like stories that are differently-heroic and female characters offer lots of variety to show strength in different ways.

I agree with @the-fledgling-artist in that so far, your character sounds obnoxious. In general, when I try to create characters that I h…[Read more]

@seekjustice

I care for neither historical accuracy nor modern sensibilities. The settings of my stories are versions of history that are as horrible, fantastical or sanitised as I need them to be. They exist only to provide a place for my characters to live and for the plot to happen. Story is king. 😛

OK, basically, from what you have read of…[Read more]

@seekjustice

Yes, I love it when love triangle are used as a vehicle to present a moral choice than merely having it be about ‘feelings’ and superficial attraction. 😀 Though I am surprised since I thought you didn’t like Austen. 😛

For the A likes B but B likes C sort… I would usually only like it if B’s feelings are reciprocated and B and C…[Read more]

@eden-anderson @rochellaine @ashira

I love romance! And love triangles. Provided that all the parties involved behave like sensible adults.

I agree that there has to be more at stake in the story than whether the couple gets together or not.

@seekjustice

What do you mean by “a certain kind of love triangle”?

@seekjustice

Historical fantasy: Of course I would read this, since QOD is a historical fantasy (or at least a misappropriation of Korean history. I justify this by saying that modern Korea’s obsession with celebrities, appearance and plastic surgery makes their society a perfect vehicle for my story themes) 😛

Steampunk: My view is that this is…[Read more]

@seekjustice

Sounds great 😀

@selah-chelyah

Haha ok. I don’t know how much I will be able to help since it doesn’t sound like the kind of things I usually read but I can give it a shot. 🙂

@selah-chelyah

I’m confused. A historical? After 9/11?

@selah-chelyah

What’s your WIP about? 😀

@selah-chelyah

Thanks for all your detailed comments and edits! 😀 I have replied to some of your comments in the doc and will do a more in-depth review at a later time. Feel free to continue whenever you have the time. 🙂

@seekjustice

Yes, I was frustrated with that part myself but couldn’t figure out how else to convey the whole near-kidnapping thing. I wanted to minimise the soldier’s role. But without introducing and developing the motives of Sungmin, the whole series of events would just seem illogical and contrived. 🙁

All right I’ll send you an email. 🙂

@seekjustice

Sorry for distracting 😛 Please continue your good work with SFI!

Glad to know that you loved this part (Drat you, inner critic! Why did you trouble me so?). Feel free to add in comments if you have any. I would like to know if there is anything I can improve on. 😀

I like Taekyeon having more page time too because it seems that…[Read more]

@fawxofthecomics

Hi! I’m writing a child character myself (actually two of them) so perhaps I can help.

To me, the Chosen One ‘prophecy fulfillment’ type of plot allows for themes that relate to growing up, maturing and dependence on God and getting the support of other people since it involves the character taking on a responsibility that is…[Read more]

@josiah

Ok, thanks! 🙂

@josiah

All right. Thanks!

@i-david @ashira @ericawordsmith @selah-chelyah @jenwriter17

Thanks for all your inputs! 😀 I think I will consider cold/hypothermia since that appears to be the most fitting so far.

@seekjustice

Who says this is about Myeongwol? 😛

By the way your point about body-to-body warming is hilarious. (Why have a drowning rescue scene and not mil…[Read more]