@warrenluther04
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WarrenLuther04 posted a new activity comment 6 years, 11 months ago
Darn, I get back from a hiatus to find friends going on a hiatus. (Wait what’s the plural form of hiatus? *hmm*)
We’ll all miss you, but I understand that sometimes, breaks are necessary! See you soon! 🙂 -
WarrenLuther04 started the topic June 2019 Critique in the forum Critiques 6 years, 11 months ago
wOw. I’ve … been gone for awhile. *ponders in a corner*
But I’m back! Hi! *waves excitedly*
So for my June critique piece, I’d like to present the third chapter of my WIP. *throws confetti*
Please critique for:
– Show Don’t Tell: It’s hard for me.
– Interesting-ness: Does it intrigue you and pull you into the story more?…[Read more]
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic December Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
– Ok. Haha that’s funny and kinda ironic that I’m not in her head enough since she’s a telepath… XD
– Ok! Thanks for the advice.
– oOh. o.O You didn’t? Wow this must not have made much sense huh? Thanks, that’s good! Haha I liked writing the ending.
Yeah I do. XP Ok, yeah, that does make sense.
Thanks! 😀
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic December Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
Urgh the tags didn’t work. *facepalm*
Here are the broken tags:
@allison-grace @bekks2017 @catwing @cowlick @enu @filewriter @lydia-writes @theinvizibleman @devastate-lasting @sarah-inkdragon @sarah-narnathron @ajaj2000 @sageinthemeadow @kara-lynn
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WarrenLuther04 started the topic December Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
Hello everyone!
For my December critique piece, I’d like to present the second chapter of my current WIP!
Before I forget, here’s the link: Chapter 2 WIP
Please look for:
– Character Development: Am I still describing my characters well?
– Show Don’t Tell: Yeah… I’ve had trouble with that before….
– Setting/Worldbuilding: Is the setting…[Read more]
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WarrenLuther04 posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago
@devastate-lasting @filewriter @jenwriter17 @ajaj2000 @catwing
Hope you all had a great Christmas! 😀
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Prayer Requests #1 in the forum Prayer Requests 7 years, 4 months ago
@allison-grace Late as always, but I will definitely pray for you!
@emgc Also praying! Glad to hear she’s doing a little better! 🙂
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WarrenLuther04 posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago
Aaaaaaand I just realized that I accidentally tagged myself. Whoops. 😛 Merry Christmas!
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WarrenLuther04 posted an update 7 years, 4 months ago
As I probably won’t make it onto Story Embers tomorrow, I wanted to wish everyone a merry Christmas! Hope you all can find time to remember the true meaning of Christmas–the birth of Jesus Christ. Merry Christmas!
@Sarah-Inkdragon
@Devastate-Lasting
@Sageinthemeadow
@ENU
@The-Inkspiller…[Read more]-
Aaaaaaand I just realized that I accidentally tagged myself. Whoops. 😛 Merry Christmas!
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Happy Christmas to you and everyone else, too!
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Thanks, @warrenluther04! And Merry Christmas to you all as well! 😉 😉 😀
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@warrenltuher04 Just saw this now. 😉 Merry Christmas to you too!
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Merry (late) Christmas everyone! 😀
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Merry late late Christmas! :3
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@devastate-lasting @filewriter @jenwriter17 @ajaj2000 @catwing
Hope you all had a great Christmas! 😀
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic November Critique: Ivory in the forum Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
@devastate-lasting Ok, thanks! Glad you liked it!
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WarrenLuther04 posted a new activity comment 7 years, 5 months ago
Yeah. It sounds fun; I hope I can do it next year.
Ooh cool! 😛 Editing takes awhile.
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WarrenLuther04 posted a new activity comment 7 years, 5 months ago
Yep.
Yeah, I really like being active on SE.That’s great! 😀 Oh wow; I haven’t even tried doing NaNoWriMo this year because I knew I’d be busy. Maybe next year…
It’s great that you’re getting a lot of work done though! Will you be posting it for beta-reading? *hopeful glance* 😀
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic November Critique: Ivory in the forum Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
Thanks! Wow–I’ve never played Fantasia personally; just heard it. It is really beautiful.
Ok, I can see how the overuse of adverbs could be a problem. I’ll see what I can do. Thanks!
Ok, I’ll see if there are any parts where I could add in that.
You’re right; another part of the significance is that he learns to always try t…[Read more]
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic November Critique: Ivory in the forum Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
Aaaaaaaand I forgot the link. Of course. *facepalm* 😛
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I-gTN4YlIu4CkwYvKh1tbr_du0igYllol7tEhiQFzi8/edit?usp=sharing
It’s set to comment access. Thanks!
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WarrenLuther04 started the topic November Critique: Ivory in the forum Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
Hi guys,
This critiquing piece isn’t a part of my WIP; it’s an essay from school. 😛 (Don’t worry it’s a narrative.)
Could you guys please look it over?
Please look for:
Sensory Images: Appeal to one or more of the five senses
Purposeful Dialogue: Dialogue that is related to the narrator’s message.
Descriptive Language: Specific details and…[Read more]
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WarrenLuther04 posted a new activity comment 7 years, 5 months ago
@catwing It’s going well, thanks for asking. Yeah, I’m okay, just really busy. School’s gotten kind of hectic, plus scouts and swim. I think I should be able to be more active this weekend, plus get some writing in.
How have you been doing?
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Yeah life can be busy.
Yay! That’s great!I’m doing good. Don’t know if I can make the 50k, but I’m getting a lot of words done anyways. So it’s still a win. 😀
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Yep.
Yeah, I really like being active on SE.That’s great! 😀 Oh wow; I haven’t even tried doing NaNoWriMo this year because I knew I’d be busy. Maybe next year…
It’s great that you’re getting a lot of work done though! Will you be posting it for beta-reading? *hopeful glance* 😀
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It is a lot of words. But I know I’m getting more words than I would be getting otherwise.
It’s the second book in a series… Maybe after I edit the first book… again… 😛
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Yeah. It sounds fun; I hope I can do it next year.
Ooh cool! 😛 Editing takes awhile.
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic November Critique Piece: Psychotic in the forum Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Great job! It reminds me of this big group game I’ve played before called “Assassin”… *shrugs*
– Style: I really liked your style; it made the whole story fun and intriguing to read.
– Characters: You described your characters really well; as a reader I could really get a glimpse of what they were thinking. I would…[Read more]
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic November Critique Piece: Psychotic in the forum Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@devastate-lasting I’ll look it over! (Don’t worry, I emailed one of my friends a link to a story once and thought they were just ignoring me and then realized that I had emailed the wrong person. XD )
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Any guys out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Oof why are you making me choose? XD
I think my favorite books/series at the present time are:
– The Inheritance Cycle by Christopher Paolini
– Harry Potter (because why not 😛 )
– The Chronicles of Narnia
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Prayer Requests #1 in the forum Prayer Requests 7 years, 6 months ago
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