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Hi guys,

This critiquing piece isn’t a part of my WIP; it’s an essay from school. 😛 (Don’t worry it’s a narrative.)

Could you guys please look it over?

Please look for:

Sensory Images: Appeal to one or more of the five senses

Purposeful Dialogue: Dialogue that is related to the narrator’s message.

Descriptive Language: Specific details and active and specific verbs

Figurative Language: personification, similes, and metaphors. (If you have suggestions for where they could go please tell me. 🙂 )

Significance: The significance of the event is fully explained.

If you could critique this for me by tomorrow, that would be great. 🙂 If not, no worries. Thanks!

@catwing @karthmim @allison-grace @devastate-lasting @everyone-else