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Hello everyone!

For my December critique piece, I’d like to present the second chapter of my current WIP!

Before I forget, here’s the link: Chapter 2 WIP

Please look for:

– Character Development: Am I still describing my characters well?

– Show Don’t Tell: Yeah… I’ve had trouble with that before….

– Setting/Worldbuilding: Is the setting described enough? Is it over-described? I am unsure.

– Plot: Does it flow well?

– And is the itsy-bitsy cliffhanger enough to keep you reading (at least until the next chapter)?

Thank you so much! 😀 😀

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