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@devastate-lasting

Great job! It reminds me of this big group game I’ve played before called “Assassin”… *shrugs*

– Style: I really liked your style; it made the whole story fun and intriguing to read.

– Characters: You described your characters really well; as a reader I could really get a glimpse of what they were thinking. I would suggest adding a bit more description to the end, right before Eleven sees himself. Then we could probably get a better idea of what he looked like, because to me he was kind of vague. (Of course, don’t do that if that was the idea you were going for. This is all based on my opinion).

– Setting: The setting was VERY interesting. I loved how you made it a maze, and then how you added the control room in the end.

– Plot: Very good plot! Nothing to add, I’d say. 🙂

Overall, I really liked it! 😀