@kristianne-hassman
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
@kristianne-hassman It’s ok! I’m sorry you’re not doing well. I’ll be praying for you<3
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Gracie started the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
This is a post for the actual writing/story portion of this castle (Fantasy number 1). Please do not comment on the thread unless you are a part of this castle and are adding the next portion to the story. (:
(Also, if you don’t want to post your portion in the castle, then search for this to post it again? Tag me, and I can find this and post it…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic NaNoWriMo??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
Ok, so I’m just gonna hop on here real quick. Sorry for not replying to anyone sooner!
I won’t be doing Camp NaNo this month. It snuck up on me XD But I’m gonna try to do NaNo in November!
So… I’ve never done Camp NaNo, though I tried to back in April or something. So I’m not sure how stressful that would be. I’ve done…[Read more]
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Yeah!
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
@kristianne-hassman Yeah okay good idea!
It’s my friend’s name lol! I have all my friends except one in there!
@eitan Oh just really saw your profile pic!! Awesome!
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Arindown replied to the topic NaNoWriMo??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
Just one question…how do you delete a group on NaNo?😝 Just me messing around with settings…
@kristianne-hassman To be honest with you, it’s my first time, so I don’t really know. I do know that you can set your own goals though, so you can take it slow, or really pack it on.
@chalice Awesome! Do you want to be buddies? My…[Read more]
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
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Arindown replied to the topic NaNoWriMo??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
Just wondering if anyone else is doing NaNoWriMo this July?
Tagging a bunch of you.
@kimlikesart @tal @beth20 @claire-h @katja-r @melodyjoy @rusted-knight @thedarkninja03 @ariella-newheart @anne_the_noob14 @kristianne-hassman @anne_the_noob14 @dakota
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Ella replied to the topic Short Story: A Chance of Hope in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Glad to help! I like your style–it was easy to follow. I’d love to read anything else you post!
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Ella replied to the topic Short Story: A Chance of Hope in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Wow! That was amazing! I only spotted a couple of things that won’t take long to fix.
Kristianne Hassman wrote:
Breathe, I tell myself. In and out. In and out. My heart calms and I lean back, closing my eyes.
Maybe you could use italics to distinguish her thoughts for readability’s sake. If you decide to do that, then ma…[Read more] -
Ella replied to the topic Short Story: A Chance of Hope in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Wow! That was amazing! I only spotted a couple of things that won’t take long to fix.
Maybe you could use italics to distinguish her thoughts for readability’s sake. If you decide to do that, then maybe you could scan the manuscript and italicize her other thoughts for consistency.
Maybe a synonym here?
Again, re…[Read more]
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Ella replied to the topic Short Story: A Chance of Hope in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Wow! That was amazing! There were only a couple of things I noticed.
Maybe you could you italics just to make her thoughts clearer. I think the readability would be easier.
There are two “help” words in this, so, for readability’s sake, consider using a synonym for one or the other.
I know this leads the reader on…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Awesome thanks!!
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Olivia Lyndaker replied to the topic Ever Read About a Fish Murderer…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
Oh, it’s totally fine. Doesn’t matter when or if you guys read it, just thought it might bring some laughs. 😉 But yes, I think I’m gonna share another of my stories here soon.
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
As far as the showing not telling thing. Is this better?
He looked at his watch. 6:30?! Why is her job interview taking so long? I hope she’ll be home soon. I’m starving!
It’s not dialogue but it still works right…? XD
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Okay!
Thanks! I’ll try to post chapter four today!
Okay, I’ll try to find those…
Yeah…I’ll try to change their reactions to more of unbelieving.
Not exactly sure what that means…could you elaborate?
Yeah…your right! I should change that lol!!
Thanks for the critique!! 🙂
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
oops @kristianne-hassman
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Hope Ann started the topic Side Characters with no point? in the forum Characters 5 years, 11 months ago
Question from Ethan this week!
How do I include side characters in a “Quest” story who seem to serve no purpose, but who without the quest would seem unrealistic?
Any thoughts, @princess-foo, @kristianne-hassman, @the-inkspiller, @naiya-dyani, @wolverinerm, @devastate-lasting?
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Arindown replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Just tagging a bunch of people that might be interested.
Sorry if I tagged you and you find it annoying.😆
@kimlikesart @tal @beth20 @lucy @claire-h @katja-r @melodyjoy @rusted-knight @thedarkninja03 @ariella-newheart @anne_the_noob14 @kristianne-hassman @writergirl101
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
@kristianne-hassman
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Aww thank you! I appreciate that. <3