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J.A.Penrose started the topic Characters | Lesson 4 : The Other Side in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 4 months ago
A lot of the time, characters are written so that they are 100% good or bad. The protagonist is perfect, good looking, and maybe he has mild claustrophobia as a weakness. The villain is evil, kills puppies and shoots up old ladies in his spare time, and maybe every now and then he tortures someone who spilt his coffee instead of killing them.
If…[Read more]
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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic A WIP Update and a Cry for Help in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years, 4 months ago
@julia Aw, thank you for the offer! I think that since I struggle with sticking with stories that I’m not personally connected to, it would be best for me to draw them from my own experiences. But I really appreciate your willingness to share your ideas with me, so thanks so much! <3
@ariella-newheart Haha, well, I always have had trouble with…[Read more]
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Steward of the Pen started the topic A WIP Update and a Cry for Help in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years, 4 months ago
Hey Parimis!
So, as some of you may remember, many moons ago I was working on a long fantasy series called The Alpha Saga, but set it aside towards the end of August for various reasons. I outlined those reasons here. I also mentioned that I was working on a new standalone novel, set some goals I had for completing it, and fully intended to te…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Characters | Lesson 3 : The Motive in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 4 months ago
The motive of your character is important. The motive is what drives your character forward, and makes every scene feel strong and meaningful. The character’s motive is what brings about the theme, and what pushes the plot along. Your plot is driven by your character’s motive. Therefore, the character motive could be the most important f…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston started the topic Check In – January Week 4 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
What I read – Emmanuel by Angela R. Watts, some of The Fall of Gondolin by J.R.R. Tolkien, WAR by Sebastian Junger, Homeland: Legend of Drizzt: Dark Elf Trilogy, Book 1 by R.A. Salvatore, some of Haroun and the Sea of Stories by Salman Rushdie
What I wrote – Concept and some paragraphs of a short story I intend to submit to SE, some copywork of T…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Characters | Lesson 2 : The Basics in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 4 months ago
I’m planning on treating this topic as a mini way of making sure that we all can get a fair idea of everything about characters from the super easy things, to the hard things that we all struggle with. (If you don’t, then goodness. Please teach me.)
Pretty much, the first thing I wanted to talk about is going back to the very basics of what a…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic No Lesson this Week, and Some Changes in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
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Evelyn replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
@julia Cool!
And yikes. That must be a pain, trying to catch up. 😛 I’m sorry. XD
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PursueWisdom replied to the topic Check In – January Week 2 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Wonderful discussion topic, sir! 🙂 Much thanks – this should help keep me more accountable in terms of my writing/reading.
What I Read: I’m currently reading The Brothers Karamazov and The Fiddler’s Gun by A.S. Peterson. Both are wonderful. I’ve not yet finished with either one yet though.
Also, I’ve been listening to an…[Read more]
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anne_the_noob14 started the topic What do y'all think of my current WIP? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
First off, I’m not sure if I’m doing this right…. :p Creating a topic, I mean. I’ve never done this, so if this is wrong, sorry! XD (and sorry if I missed tagging someone I should’ve… I still need to find like a list of people or something, lol)
So I started this short story, I suppose it is, on a whim yesterday night because I wanted to…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Characters | Lesson 1 : What do You Know? in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 5 months ago
Happy new year guys!
To be frankly honest, I was not expecting so much to have changed between this time last year and now. I mean, Story Ember’s didn’t even exist then. But anyways. That’s not what this lesson is about.
Before I get stuck into our new topic, I’d love everyone to tell me what they think about a few things. As you know, I’m…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston started the topic Check In – January Week 2 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
What I read – I finished reading Dune, started reading The Confession by John Grisham, Tenemental by Vikki Warner, and American Military History by Wesley K. Clark via The Great Courses. I picked up or was gifted a ton more book (biography, drama, essay, fantasy, magical realism, military scifi) but I doubt I’ll be reading these over the next t…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic A General Apology in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
Well, you may have gathered this, but us guildmasters are now all seriously thinking about what we can be doing to help improve the guilds, and make them more active. I can clearly see that things have been lagging in Parimi Alca, and how it could actually be becoming more of a burden than it is a help.
If you are struggling with this in this…[Read more]
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Selah Chelyah started the topic A Matter of Life and Death… in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal @bama-rose @raemarie @corissa @kate @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @j-parkhurst @gabbyj @cassandraia @chalice @noahlitle @julianne @germaine-han @maddiejay @sesi @r-j-karas @rosemarylouise @msqueen8 @samuel @eden-anderson @professorsjb @elizabeth @scarletimmortalized @parker @katthewriter @taylorclogston Cool thread! 😀
I have been wanting to read Dune for a while now, but haven’t gotten around to it. 😛 Do you like it so far?
That’s really neat! 🙂
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What I have read
I have read a lot in 2018 – too much to all write out, (and I’m having trouble thinking of them all 😛 ) but included in the list are: Agatha Christie…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
Thank you! I’m glad to be here!
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EricaWordsmith replied to the topic Crazy Writers, Artists, and Dragons in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@julia YES!!!!!!!!! And your immediate response is,
A. I want to play that on the piano (or cello in my case)
B. I want to learn to sing that
C. Both
And on the other hand movies can be ruined because the music wasn’t good enough.
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The Fledgling Artist replied to the topic Crazy Writers, Artists, and Dragons in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@julia I don’t think that’s just a musician thing. 🎶 😁
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Steward of the Pen started the topic Anyone else doing Theme Mastery? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Hey Parimis!
So, I made the last minute decision to sign up for Theme Mastery the night enrollment closed, and so far it has been AMAZING! I was wondering if any of you enrolled too, and if so, how would you like to start a discussion thread about it? I thought it might be fun and helpful to discuss things as we go along and share how we’re…[Read more]
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PursueWisdom replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
Hi all!!
I’m not sure if you’ve seen this…
BUT WE WERE GIVEN AN HONORABLE MENTION IN THIS WAR!!!
See https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cELNYNDhdM5o1DcXvFwxkTE29p7MnZtcRzRobNuExzY/edit#
I found that Daeus’s feedback was super helpful – so please read it! 🙂
Anyway, thanks especially to ESJohnson (for doing most of the writing) and Darth…[Read more]
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