Macey Bourque

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@fawxofthecomics If you have a crazy busy week every once and a while, that’s understandable, and you don’t have to worry about being taken out. 🙂 But if you’re too busy for a guild in general and can’t post regularly, then I’ll have to remove you. I totally understand being busy. It’s hard making time for certain things, However, the rule still…[Read more]

@fawxofthecomics Rain! Yes! *sighs contentedly* 🙂

@fawxofthecomics Sweet! Hello fellow logic-lover. 😉

Thanks guys! Glad you like it! 🙂 Although, I must say @fawxofthecomics was really the one who came up with the idea. I’m just the one who commented offhandedly that I liked thunderstorms and, quite accidentally, got the whole thing started.

@evelyn I will! By the way, Fawx likes logic too 😉

@sarah-narnathron @hope-ann Thanks guys! And yeah…[Read more]

@fawxofthecomics You might find this article helpful: https://storyembers.org/how-to-make-a-character-come-alive/ It was very useful to me in learning about character motivations.

@fawxofthecomics

You said Ian was kidnapped?

I think that may be a good start to questioning, maybe he thinks Jordan can help him?

Hi @steward-of-the-pen 🙂 And I’ll include @fawxofthecomics too 😀 I love this idea!!

One option is to give her a friend who doesn’t want to be Thunderstruck but feels like he/she could step up and do it if they had to. Try stressing the way that friend feels, and work in the main character’s feelings in a less obvious way. You can make it look…[Read more]

@fawxofthecomics

Like @ajaj200 touched on, motivations come from what a character values. They also come from the character’s fears—maybe fear for their life, of losing someone or something, or even of boredom. Few things shape a character as much as their fears do. Fears can cause them to act falsely. They can cause them to run away when they…[Read more]

@fawxofthecomics

Hey, Fawx 🙂

One thing I’ve learned about character motivation is that there’s something valuable (and/or personal) at stake if the main character doesn’t complete the quest. So may I ask some questions to understand what you’re trying to tell? 🙂

How do Ian’s parents deal with the fate of their friend? Are they sad everytime…[Read more]