Beth Darlene

ShiningScribe replied to the topic Cheesehead makes an entrance in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years ago

@beth20

13!!!! amazing! I love that you’re starting the writing young! My brain explodes with the possibilities for you…let’s make a deal. I’ll write and tag you if you do the same 🙂
Gracie replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years ago

@beth20
<p style=”text-align: center;”>Chapter I</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>~a time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted~</p>
Joab ben Elizer, of the tribe of Judah owned a two-story home with a wide guests’ courtyard in Bethlehem. It was a small, though not unimportant town, two m…[Read more]
Arindown replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago

@eitan Looks like you thought that out pretty well. I like all your weapons and magic.

@beth20 No problem. Aunty A is fine…she’s got kittens.😍 Don’t feel like you always have to reply when I tag you.

Coffee and Fruit Loops for breakfast??? That would have me bouncing off the walls.😄 Me and coffee only get along good when the situation calls…[Read more]
Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago

@beth20 I’m Timothy, the only one on the site. Which is good, since I’m not going to give out my last name here. 😄

I didn’t read the mirror part, but I think the basic idea. People are going up and seeing their personalities, more or less?
Tal replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago

@beth20

Sorry! 😁 I joined YWW last week and that’s been taking a lot of time, and then once I fell behind I kept putting off catching up on what’s been going on. Can you give be a quick summary of what’s been happening?
Gracie replied to the topic Hi from Texas! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years ago

@beth20

Thanks!…. Who’s Rosemary Sutcliffe?
Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago

@beth20 @arindown @rusted-knight @kimlikesart @anne_the_noob14

Tagging everyone (I think) who is involved in this currently!

I decided to write Marlowe looking at the mirror, but I’m having a lot of trouble figuring out her character. I’m thinking about making a topic, but if any of you have advice or comments, I would appreciate it.…[Read more]
writergirl101 replied to the topic what’s up in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years ago

@beth20

I’m a little older than 13 and somewhat younger than 17 🙂

Are you only working on Ninjanaria (did I spell that right?) or are you working on other things?

Man, it’s so fun to talk to people!! XD I’m so tired of COVID! 🙁
writergirl101 replied to the topic what’s up in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years ago

@beth20

Same!! I saved it all (thankfully), so it’s kinda fun to look back over everything and appreciate how you’ve grown. 😉

Yeah I have no idea what that is. Maybe I’ll restart my computer…
writergirl101 replied to the topic what’s up in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years ago

@beth20

Great! Yeah, I wrote this one book with my sister and friend when I was ten as well. It was so bad, haha!

Real quick, did all that weird stuff pop up on your screen <span style=”display: inline !important; float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; font-family: Georgia,’Times New Roman’,’Bitstream Charter’,Times,serif; f…[Read more]
writergirl101 replied to the topic what’s up in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years ago

@beth20

Hi Beth! I will <span style=”display: inline !important; float: none; background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; font-family: Georgia,’Times New Roman’,’Bitstream Charter’,Times,serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;…[Read more]
Mel replied to the topic My Story (without a title) Chapter 1 first half in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 6 years, 1 month ago

@devastate-lasting

Well, I usually write in first person and still use thoughts. I had this big long thing in my brain about like since I am writing in past tense and the thought is present. idk haha it was random

@beth20

It didn’t italicize the wreck sentence (lol) because I copied and pasted from my document and italics never transfer. I must…[Read more]
Arindown replied to the topic Share Your Setting! in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago

Just tagging a bunch of people that might be interested.

Sorry if I tagged you and you find it annoying.😆

@kimlikesart @tal @beth20 @lucy @claire-h @katja-r @melodyjoy @rusted-knight @thedarkninja03 @ariella-newheart @anne_the_noob14 @kristianne-hassman @writergirl101
Alabama Rose replied to the topic Ever Read About a Fish Murderer…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago

@beth20 Awesome! 🙂
Alabama Rose replied to the topic Ever Read About a Fish Murderer…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago

@beth20

Yes, I’m on YWW!! Is your name Beth on there? I’ll try to find you, haha. 🙃 What is OYAN?
Kristianne Hassman replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago

@beth20

Ah, ok. That makes sense! 🙂
Olivia Lyndaker replied to the topic Ever Read About a Fish Murderer…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago

@beth20 I’m glad you like it! Ya, I like reading stories like this, but I like writing them even more. And all it takes is a bit of a mess up in life, a sense of humour, and exaggeration. 😉
Kristianne Hassman replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago

@beth20

Sorry I’m late with this. It’s definitely easier to read. Good job with the edits! I just have a few comments to make:

First, try to show instead of tell. For example, instead of saying that their mom is out looking for a job, show it through the characters’ dialogue and thoughts. Like, you could have one of the kids ask if Mom is home…[Read more]
Gracie replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago

@beth20

Just read the recent one. Good job (:
Mel started the topic My Story (without a title) Chapter 1 first half in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 6 years, 1 month ago

@beth20 @devastate-lasting @arindown @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @eden-anderson @emma-starr @wolverinerm @chalice @claire-h @olivia @eitan @vic

Hey guys!

Yeah I know. I tagged like a billion people. LOL. But I want all of ya to read it! 🙂

If I didn’t tag you FEEL FREE to read and comment! (In fact, please do 🙂 )

(for all you who I told I w…[Read more]
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