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F.C. Tait replied to the topic Strong Female Character in the forum Characters 8 years, 1 month ago
@theresa-play Hey! The others have already given some great advice, but I just wanted to add one thing. A lot of people have said to remember that girls are still weaker than guys, and that is true, but as someone who does martial arts I just wanted to point out that a lot of fighting styles don’t rely on brute strength, so she absolutely can…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic Strong Female Character in the forum Characters 8 years, 1 month ago
@theresa-play Last night I was reminded of a strong female character I know from a show. She is a soldier, and a very good one. She is an excellent fighter and a sharp-shooter without equal. However, she follows her SO without any hesitation. She completely respects every single member of her team, she doesn’t rule over them and trusts them to do…[Read more]
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Princess Foo replied to the topic Strong Female Character in the forum Characters 8 years, 1 month ago
*steals @ncstokes ‘s hat and notes for myself*
@theresa-play Prepare for rant. I was watching Return of the King yesterday, and Eowyn was complaining that she was being forced to go with the women and children. While I understand being forced into a role you don’t want to fill “just because”, I was annoyed because she acted like preparing food…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Internal monologue in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 1 month ago
Well, I was going to cover r-m-archer and Ethryndal’s question today, but I think I should take a week more to think about it. In the meantime, we’re going to cover Kate’s question: how does one write powerful, non-tellish internal monologue?
This is actually one of my favorite topics, so you might get a long lesson.
When you really master…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Tragedy, ahoy! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 1 month ago
Hey Saxon Scribes!
I hope your swords, er, pencils, are sharp because the next guild war is here!
This time we have two weeks so it won’t be so rushed and helter-skelter. 😉 I think we’ll do great.
The prompt? You’ll love it. We need to write the most emotive death scene we…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic What do you want to improve in with character development? in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 2 months ago
Hi Saxon Scribes!
It’s late, but it’s still Monday. We’re back to talking about character development.
What I want to do here is open up the floor for you to voice the struggles that you’ve been going through with character development. We’ll either gather round and help you with them here in this thread or I’ll create a future thread…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Longer chapters in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey Saxon Scribes,
Today’s Monday, so we’re back to out yearly theme discussion of character development. I wanted to share something I’ve picked up recently that has been hugely impactful in my writing.
Longer chapters.
I used to write chapters that were about 2,000-2,500 words long on average. 800 was my lowest. 4,000 something was my…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic Strong Female Character in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@theresa-play I once had a MC that was a great fighter with just about any weapon (she was taught specifically to do this) doesn’t wear dresses, and rides griffons. She becomes essentially the bodyguard of a girl her age and they don’t get along at all. The second girl is a jerk, but when she stops being a jerk they become great friends and my MC…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Bondage in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 2 months ago
This being Monday, it’s time for our annual theme discussion on character development.
I thought I’d touch on one of the best character development tools I’ve discovered: bondage.
Every character has faults, right? Their faults build our sympathy. Bondage goes farther. Bondage is something your character can’t get out of, can’t escape from, is…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic We're giving word wars a try in the forum Announcements 8 years, 2 months ago
Hi Saxon Scribes,
While we took a break from it last week, the guild wars are starting up again. This time, instead of competing to see who can write the best prompt, we’re competing to see which guild can be the most productive during the week.
Basically, anyone in our guild who writes over 1,000 words this week can submit their word count at…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Critique for Short Story in the forum Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hello Saxon Scribes!
I’ve been working on a short story for a competition that is coming up fairly soonish (not the SE one) and was hoping for some feedback. If any of you could just look at this doc and leave comments and suggestions, that would be amazing.
I’m mostly trying to deal with character development, preachiness, theme, and the…[Read more]
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NCStokes replied to the topic Strong Female Character in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@theresa-play I may or may not be squirreling away tips from this thread for my own use. *sneakily hides notes away in my hat* Just one thing that annoys me in SFCs, [INCOMING RANT EVERYONE DUCK!!]Â , they often seem unnecessarily sulky. They’re like stereotypical brooding bad boy’s twin sister. It’s important to have the backstory impact the…[Read more]
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Strong Female Character in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@theresa-play I have a few “strong female characters” as main characters. One thing that helped me was this article and part two of said article . My mom thought those were so good that she shared them on Facebook!
My girls are very good fighters, aren’t very girly in general, and seem like they would be stereotypical tomboys. But they’re not.…[Read more]
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Sarah vdH replied to the topic ahoy! in the forum Introduce Yourself 8 years, 2 months ago
@theresa-play, my fellow infp-ish person! 😀
Normally I don’t give much in the way of tips, it’s easier to teach it in person, but I can tell you this: *Drum roll* remember, the map is the lock and the compass is the key.
I write mostly fiction with a heavy lean of the fantasy side. I love writing adventure stories and things involving a quest…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic The First Guild War in the forum Announcements 8 years, 2 months ago
@mcnoggin @cindy @kate @ethryndal @elizabeth @girlsetfree @theresa-play @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @livgiordano @lady-iliara @m_corinnemusic @j-parkhurst @j.a.penrose
Hey guys,
Just wanted to give you an update on the next guild war. We’re taking a break this week for the guildmasters to figure out how this guild war is going to be judge…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic The Assassin in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey Saxon Scribes,
I barely made this post in time before Monday ended. *blushes*
Along the lines of our annual discussion of character development, I thought it would be worthwhile to camp out on the assassin stereotype for a week and take a deep look at him.
This character type has a definite aura built around them. There are a few different…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic The Accountability Thread in the forum Accountability & Achievements 8 years, 2 months ago
@mcnoggin @cindy @kate @ethryndal @elizabeth @girlsetfree @theresa-play @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @livgiordano @lady-iliara @m_corinnemusic @j-parkhurst @j.a.penrose
Monday is here.
Last week, I almost completed my goals. I wrote a little over 5,000 words and I drafted my email but haven’t sent it yet.
My goals this week are to writ…[Read more]
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Filewriter replied to the topic Strong Female Character in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@theresa-play. Hi! I had a similar situation when I came up with one of my characters. I wanted her to be strong, but not one of “those girls”. I agree with @jenwriter17. For my girl, I had plenty of strong boy characters that were a lot stronger then her. She would be a whole lot stronger then say, me, but still smaller then and weaker then her…[Read more]
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Strong Female Character in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@theresa-play I like the idea that she likes dancing! Could it be that she heard it from other people in the rebellion? Like a man telling a story of how he used to dance with his wife? Another thing to remember is that men and women are different in how they think and react to emotions. @josiah wrote a really good article on it here:…[Read more]
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Jenwriter17 replied to the topic Strong Female Character in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@theresa-play I think the key is being realistic. for the most part, girls are weaker than guys. Have you ever watched the Big Valley show? it’s a western. Well, anyway there’s this character (Victoria) who’s the mom of adult kids. She’s a ‘strong female character’ I guess, but they went way overboard with it. She can shoot from the hip in a…[Read more]
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