Hey everyone, so I feel really bad about this, but I don’t think I’ll have enough time to be part of a guild anymore. I’m going off to college soon and I’m already really busy, and I don’t think I can be a reliable contributor. I really love my guild, but I’m not contributing anything and I just don’t have time to keep updated with everything.…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb That makes a lot of sense. 👍🏻

I think so? But I am probably the least experienced person here, so… 😛

@kate I do hereby declare that I am mightily pleased with this work. Be free, tiny story!

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@kate OH MY GOSH YESSSSSSS

Yesssss

I love it.

@kate Ooh, sorry! XD XD (I couldn’t tell!! Sorry!) xP

@kate Ooh, it’ fun seeing the changes. I feel like there’s a gap now though, between them talking and suddenly, she’s dying…idk. It felt like it was setting up for a longer scene. Anyone else?

(sorry I can’t make notes *in* Google Docs at the moment…)

@corissa AWW thanks! Yay!

@kate You made it better than it was 😀

@kate OH. MY. WORD. That was good. It’s so cool to see my idea come to life through somebody else’s words! 😄

I don’t have time atm to go over it with a fine-toothed comb, but later today I will. Great job!

Oh wow. Definitely will @corissa

Ooh, the unclear dispositions point is something I have to think about for my “Alex and Ian” story. My characters often just sorta react to things without underlying feelings… Wow, that just clicked. I have got to try this.

@kate Oh, yeah, that’ll work. 😛

Well…ah, I guess it could work. I was originally trying to show a parallel between the healer’s lost relationship with his bride and his giving that to the wounded girl/lady and her lover.

But if you think it could work another way and still be powerful, go for it!

@kate

@kate You go, girl!

Wow, I’m so glad everyone likes it… 8)

@kate Hehehehe… That’s probably because I never make outlines…I am a poor planner. 😶 It comes to me in pictures, not plot points. 😁

@literatureforthelight That’s a GREAT idea! I’m not sure if that’s exactly what mine is, but it’s similar.

(I am so embarrassed about this 😆) I wrote it kind of as a…idk, stream-of-consciousness thingy? That’s not the right word. Anyway, it’s not a strict outline, but it’s not an actual rough draft.

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I will be working on an outline this evening too. Good hunting! 😛

@daeus-lamb @kate @gabbyj YES I am loving this idea. What if several of us come up with a rough draft or even just outline and compare?