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@daeus-lamb When will the winner be announced?

@cindy @kate @ethryndal @elizabeth @girlsetfree @theresa-play @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @livgiordano @lady-iliara @m_corinnemusic @j-parkhurst @daeus-lamb

I hope I haven’t missed anyone.

Well folks, here it is: the first draft of the first candidate for the First Guild War submission for New Wessex.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kwHiBYSIEl8uSIaidFjdAOT_Mgts_mEIJor4cuac7Kw/edit

Tear into it, you guys. Even though I wrote the draft, we’re all working together on this.

@daeus-lamb Okay, I should be able to do that. I’m doing fine on it right now. Just a little difficulty with actually describing the sunrise itself. I’d appreciate some help with that, since I don’t think in an artistic way.

@daeus-lamb I have started. Do we have to have it ready to submit by Saturday?

Unless someone can come up with a clear, simple explanation for those two things, we might have to scratch the “character causing the final sunrise” idea. Regrettable, but perhaps necessary.

@cindy @kate @ethryndal @elizabeth @girlsetfree @theresa-play @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @livgiordano @lady-iliara @m_corinnemusic @j-parkhurst @daeus-lamb

I agree with @r-m-archer on this one. Having the character as a child doesn’t seem to fit with what I’d envisioned based on what the other Saxon Scribes have been saying. I especially…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb I’m thinking a serious observer would be best, too. Sarcasm doesn’t seem like it would fit with the rest of the scene.

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@theresa-play That’s ok . . . I think? We already have a lot of amazing people working on this, and I think if you joined, everything would likely reach a toxic level of amazingness. So don’t worry about it too too much. 😉

@kate Much better.

“I love it even more.”  – Olaf

@kate @daeus-lamb So our name is officially the Saxon Scribes?

@kate That’s great! How did you do that?

@corissa I like the idea of a strange sort of peaceful. The world is still ravaged, but the final sunrise is almost an oxymoron. Almost. So it’s symbolic of the old passing away – but there’s hope (symbolized in the sunrise) – and the new is coming. It’s a picture of redemption.

As for the character . . . I think it would fit best if (he? she?)…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb Oh – sunrise. I’ve been thinking sunset this whole time. *facepalm*

@daeus-lamb Is it a sunrise or a sunset?

@literatureforthelight @j-a-penrose Just forgot to tag you guys on the reply I wrote above this one. 😉

Heh. Whenever I have to tag everyone, I just find someplace where someone else has gone through the trouble of typing them out. . . and then I copy and paste. So call me a cheater. 😀

@daeus-lamb So we’re going up against Avensbeck and Rillumen. Are those the only guilds besides us?

@r-m-archer It really depends on the tone of the description. That’s where we have to start. And I don’t think we can decide on that until more of our fellow New Wessians have had a say.

@kate Right – I just saw that this discussion is only a few hours old. 🙂