@taylorclogston
Active 3 years, 5 months ago-
Isaiah replied to the topic The Promise of Jesse Woods Week #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
Something interesting that the author seems to do in this book is instead of painting us a picture of the places Matt encounters, we learn about them as he sees them.
Chris Fabry could have introduced Dogwood something like this: “Dogwood stretched out ahead of us like the fold of a blanket thrown lazily across an untidy bed. Stores…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic The Promise of Jesse Woods Week #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@caseybold @elisha-starquill @allertingthbs @taylorclogston @eden-anderson @jennythefaun
Hey, this is already going where I didn’t expect it. I actually really liked Matt. 😁Well, particularly his younger self, but the older self was fine too. It’s fascinating how we read the same things differently. @taylorclogston, the lines you quoted, I…[Read more]
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Eden Anderson replied to the topic The Promise of Jesse Woods Week #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
Ooh, this is so fun! I feel a little out of my league though, because I’m not used to critiquing or looking very in-depth at books. I just kind of read them and if I like them, I like them and if I hate them, I hate them. And don’t have any particular idea why. 🙃 I guess it’s good to do things outside of our comfort zones sometimes, though.
So,…[Read more]
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JennytheFaun replied to the topic The Promise of Jesse Woods Week #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@taylorclogston I would have expected most of the book to take place in ’72, which @toklaham-veruzia confirmed. I think I’ll have to watch the rest of the story play out before I can say for sure whether I’m a fan of that technique (starting the book on the edge of the climax) or not. Like Daeus said, it did get me involved right away. The…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic The Promise of Jesse Woods Week #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@caseybold @taylorclogston @toklaham-veruzia @allertingthbs @jennythefaun
I’ve honestly never thought about the pros and cons of revealing or hiding aspects of a character early on in a story. As I’m thinking about it, it seems the one thing I’d avoid is the completely mysterious character.
In Six of Crows, all the character are introduced with…[Read more]
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Caseybold replied to the topic The Promise of Jesse Woods Week #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@taylorclogston Only that it’s written from Matt’s view, knowing what he knows, and not from a more omniscient author perspective.
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Evelyn replied to the topic Wassup Christ Fam in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
@taylorclogston Okay perfect.
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Evelyn replied to the topic How many characters is too many? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 7 months ago
@a_nna This is something I’ve been thinking a lot about lately, as my WIP is centered around a crew of nine people. I have yet to figure this out application to my story, but I think it largely depends on how you pull it off. Like @taylorclogston pointed out there’s a difference between whether they are part of the main cast of POV-providers or…[Read more]
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allertingthbs started the topic Wassup Christ Fam in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 7 months ago
Thanks for @taylorclogston for inviting me to the forum. I’m excited to see more varying viewpoints on the Christian faith that we share, as that is one of the most effective ways to solidify said faith. At the moment I am teaching myself to both read and listen to more books. The only Marvel movies I haven’t seen are The Incredible Hulk and The…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani posted a new activity comment 6 years, 7 months ago
@taylorclogston *drops in a day later* Hm, yeah, it’ll be interesting to see the science/faith thing in Brotherhood. Interesting that so many people don’t think they can work together. 😛
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Having trouble getting my post to show up in the forum Guidelines & FAQ 6 years, 7 months ago
@daeus-lamb @taylorclogston @edmund-lloyd-fletcher I’m not sure if I can’t adjust the anti-spam filters. I will certainly seek to do so if I can, but it’s probably tied to the forum software we use and adjusting that spam filter could be tricky. I’ll try to look at this more after the summit later this month, but at the moment, my best…[Read more]
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Edmund Lloyd Fletcher replied to the topic Release Timeline/Schedule in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@taylorclogston thanks, I’ll check that group out!
@wolverinerm More of what tasks to plan for, plus how long each takes. Something like, “Let’s see… I need to allow 3 weeks for this thing, then after that is complete it takes another week for that thing…” The point being, I can then use that timeline to work out a release schedule on my…[Read more]
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Adrelle replied to the topic Writing a fantasy (Werewolf) novel: Am I doing things right? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 7 months ago
Oh, thank you for replying @taylorclogston! 😊
I actually watched the first season with a lot skipping but sometimes I’d land on the wrong scenes and I just couldn’t take it. I’ll just look for a clean version of the episodes and yes, thank you for suggesting the video essays. I’ll check them out. Though, from what I’ve heard, seen, and read from…[Read more]
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Emma Starr replied to the topic I NEED YOUR HELP! ANSWER THESE 4 QUESTIONS!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@phoenix @evelyn @kate @sir-leeds @deeprun @taylorclogston
Thank you all so much!! Your answers are all thought-provoking. Here are some of my thoughts…
@taylorclogston I used secular literature as a very general term. I define Christian literature as a work that is by a professing Christian. So I defined anything other than Christian as…[Read more]
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Sarah Inkdragon replied to the topic Let’s talk about representation! in the forum Characters 6 years, 7 months ago
I’ll definitely check Dekker out. And yes, read Peretti! He’s absolutely amazing at developing tension and inserting Christian elements into genres that don’t seem very “Christian”. I read and loved his “Cooper Kids Adventure Series” as a young teen, and I’ll still re-read some of the strong ones like The Door In the Dragon’s Throat, beca…[Read more]
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers 6 years, 7 months ago
I’m more amused than worried, but that is good to know.
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic The Songkiller’s Synopsis!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Dilemma: I’ve got conflicting feedback on my blurb. Some say I should change it, others that I shouldn’t.
I’m in search of opinionated people to help clear me out of this muddle.
Here’s what I had:
In the beginning, the Songkiller sang chaos into the fabric of the world. Now, he’s returning to finish his dark symphony…
Exton hunts to red…[Read more]
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luciusbraun replied to the topic HELP PLEASE POSTED TOO MANY TIMES in the forum Art Critique 6 years, 7 months ago
thank you @josiah and @taylorclogston!
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers 6 years, 7 months ago
I haven’t seen ET, and naturally get a lot of fire for that. That being said, the story plot for ET sounds a LOT like my story. They even share wounds? I actually based the monster’s appearance more off of a thumbnail I had seen of Slenderman.
Well, in the early stages of writing the story, I had several directions I could go for…[Read more]
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers 6 years, 7 months ago
Thank you for the feedback! It was extremely helpful, and I admit I laughed a couple of times at the way you phrased some of the flaws. I was not ever trying to be corny, but now I certainly see it. The alternate ending with Olivia sounds appealing, but it also sounds a bit convenient, not to mention a tad outside her character to…[Read more]
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