Rusted Knight

The youth stared up at Nithel, his eyes starved. The ache in Nithel grew deeper, and tightened. There was a fight inside him. Choosing something. Nithel waited, silent.

Then like a veil, the Alessio’s eyes were closed. “Doubtless I have a certain distinction for being a walking tragedy and that certainly accents hope since there’s nothing els…[Read more]

@rusted-knight

Loved your post!

Liorah

I listened as the small man wove a tale of snakes, battles, and people small enough to enter the warren of a rabbit. The glowing clouds of smoke drew the story in the air, making it come alive in all its vivid details of bravery and peril.

When it was over, I breathed a sigh. I had gotten so caught up in…[Read more]

@skylarynn

I don’t mind if you join!!!

Several characters have been, or are about to be, flipped for new ones. Good timing.

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@joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien

(I feel like I’m forgetting somebody. Sorry!) What do you all think?

Nithel brought a hand to his bare chin, rubbing it. His eyes lowered some in thought.

Then his chin jerked to the side, hands coming down. Alessio. Bowing to the man.

“Respectfully, sir, you are a ignominious liar.” Was spoken before Nithel could think further.

Nithel stood stunned a moment. Face stoic, watching Alessio for a time, before dra…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien @anne_the_noob14 @rusted-knight @joelle-stone @beth20

Olavir looked around the room. Everyone stopped talking and stared at him when he had walked in, which was just what he wanted.

“Well met, gentlemen.” His voice was buttery smooth.

“He- hello sir.” A young man in the corner, fingering a sling that hung from his belt, spoke up. There was fear in his voice.

Good.

Everyone here looked lost,…[Read more]

Sorry! I forgot to tag you guys on the Chronicle. (:

@beth20 @joelle-stone @rusted-knight @this-is-not-an-alien @anne_the_noob14

Merry Christmas!!!

Jaylin’s eyes widened when he realized more mirrors were scattered on the walls, they widened further when he saw other people surrounding him.

What the heck is happening here!?

In front of him sat Nithel. He looked about as confused as Jaylin felt. At least I’m not the only one.

Nithel rubbed his back like he had had a hard landing. Nithel als…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Thank you! I also struggle with worldview, and I actually didn’t plan any of this. It’s actually quite funny, I had no idea what Liorah was like until I began to write. Then, she just took shape in the second chapter and ran away with the story XD

That is so awesome! I love when characters do that! Like Kiark, I didn’t rea…[Read more]

Nithel hesitated, pausing. The man was just staring at him. Had Nithel done something wrong? He probably did. Gabrel always found something. Was it how he walked? He hadn’t said anything yet, so it couldn’t be that. Maybe he should’ve given back the greeting…

Then the man nodded to him.

Why did he do that! Nithel’s chest went on overload. The…[Read more]

Whoever sees this, it’s amazing. Please. Take the time to listen.

A Message of Hope from Shannon Scholten – YouTube

And, if you have time, would you share your thoughts?

@rusted-knight @this-is-not-an-alien @eitan @anyone <3

Nithel’s eyes narrowed on the wet man, just a bit. He bowed? Egad, what did he do that for? Nithel was no royalty...

What country bowed? The Twin States? Chesed? His mind couldn’t remember the other places that existed. He was so new to the world...

He almost raised his hand in greeting to the fellow, but didn’t, jumping inside as more and more…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Ooh, I repeat what literally everyone else is saying: Great story and character!! Eliakim… that’s a Bible name, right? Cool! Your book sounds very complex and I’m also very tempted to ask you to tell me what those spoilers were about, but I know how hard it is for a writer to resist that temptation, so I won’t tempt you.…[Read more]

@rusted-knight

Yes, thank you! I totally did not know what I got Kiark into there, and how on earth he would get that thing off, ha ha.

@this-is-not-an-alien

Ikr, like all our babies are reckless headless chickens

Yes! 😛

And thank you! I’m so glad you liked it and that it actually flowed well…. I thought it was choppy, he he. And oh man,…[Read more]

Doing her best to ignore her claustrophobia, Lytt followed him deeper into the tunnels. So death was possible, as was serious injury. The option that this was all a nightmare had faded with Teagan’s body. The danger was too real to be only a dream.

Danger. Actual life-and-death danger.

Dharin.

Her footsteps and Isaac’s thudded in her ears as t…[Read more]

@rusted-knight,

By the way, when Rosario asked what Riure thought of the dragons, you totally read my mind! I was so going to have her hand it over to Allen. 😉

Cries of pain. Odd snarls. Wind rushing around her as people rushed past.

Sadiq barked loudly, leading Riure away to safety. “Master Ziess?” she called, a little nervous now. What was going on? This was where eyesight would come in handy.

Someone gripped her hand, yanking her backward. Sadiq growled ominously. Ehud, probably. “I think we need to…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Ha, thank you, that was just what we needed. I’m good with it if everyone else is…

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