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Katja R replied to the topic Hey!! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 2 months ago
Hey Beth,
You did a really good job!! Here are a few things I would fix.
When someone is talking or thinking you don’t have to put it on the next line. Before you get confused, let me explain.
1. Your first paragraph is good and then you have:
Looking at the house, Jered sighed,
It would have been a majestic house in the 1800s.
You…[Read more]
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Katja R posted a new activity comment 6 years, 2 months ago
Yeah I’ll post it on my intro page. I can’t get to the second page either. @daeus-lamb do you know why? Thanks!!
-Katja-
Hey I was able to read it!
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Don’t post it on your intro page lol! I just commented on your actual comment like I’m doing now haha!
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Katja R started the topic Christian Movies in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
@claire-h @arindown @melodyjoy @beth20 @wolverinerm @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @theswordinthebook
Hey guys!
Recently some of us got onto the topic of Christian movies. We decided to start a discussion about them. On this page we would like to discuss movies that we’ve seen, how they help us, how they can help us with writing our characters, t…[Read more]
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Katja R replied to the topic The Most Important Part Of My Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
Wow! Yes. That’s kinda sad that the movie said that. And yeah, we really should be the ones pointing people to Christ, but we don’t do it as often as we should. Thanks for sharing.
-Katja
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Katja R replied to the topic The Most Important Part Of My Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
Sounds good! I’ll start the discussion and tag you, @arindown, @beth20, and @melodyjoy.
Let me know if anyone else comes up with topics you want to be discussed on this new page.
-Katja
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Katja R replied to the topic Any Fellow “Sherlock Holmes” Fans Out There? *raises hand* in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
If anyone doesn’t like Sherlock Holmes books they’re crazy. I loved reading them as a kid. (still read them at times) I remember reading a series of his “sister”. She was named Elona Holmes. They were pretty nice to read as a kid.
-Katja
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Katja R replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Thanks Melody! I’m glad you liked it! If I didn’t make any mistakes in this chapter I will be SO surprised. 😀 Thanks for reading it!
-Katja
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Katja R replied to the topic The Most Important Part Of My Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
@claire-h @arindown @melodyjoy @beth20
Wait. What exactly would we talk about in this discussion?
1. Are we just going to complain about how Christian movies aren’t good?
Or
2. Are we going to to discuss movies that we’ve seen, how they help us, how they can help us with writing our characters, things they could have maybe done better, movie…[Read more]
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Katja R replied to the topic The Most Important Part Of My Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
I can do it tonight. If I can write up a good introduction. 😉 I don’t really care. Just let me know.
-Katja
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Katja R started the topic The Four Rebels chapter 3 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
@arindown @wolverinerm @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @claire-h @beth20 @theswordinthebook @melodyjoy
Here is Chapter 3 of The Four Rebels.
Chapter 3: Rydel
The gun fired and I leaned forward in my saddle. I had to win this race. As my horse got faster I could feel the wind blowing my hair. Mother thought I need to cut it but I liked it being…[Read more]
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Katja R replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
I don’t know why, but I can’t view page two. So if I made a mistake in my comments, sorry cuz I can’t edit it. I couldn’t view page two earlier either. Hopefully this isn’t a giant problem and will go away in a bit.
-Katja
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Katja R replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Hey Beth,
You did a really good job!! Here are a few things I would fix.
When someone is talking or thinking you don’t have to put it on the next line. Before you get confused, let me explain
Your first paragraph is good and then you have:Looking at the house, Jered sighed,
It would have been a majestic house in the 1800s.
You can…[Read more]
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Hey,
I was able to view what you said cuz I just went on the activity of the group instead of my post! So hopefully you think of that lol!
I thought everything you said was a very good critique thanks!
-Beth
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Katja R replied to the topic The Most Important Part Of My Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
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Katja R replied to the topic The Four Rebels chapter 2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Hey,
Thanks for your comments.
Yup, I meant off. 🙂
I didn’t realize the running thing. Thanks for pointing that out.
Yes, I have to find a synonym for explosion….but I guess what might be confusing you is that it happens twice. I’ll try to explain this. So the “bomb” explodes once in it’s location when it’s let out, then it sends…[Read more]
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Katja R replied to the topic The Most Important Part Of My Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
We should all write one together. 😀 It would be fun!!
I haven’t seen Beyond the Mask but I will watch it later.
I know! A lot of the so called “Christian” movies aren’t even very Christ-like. I really agree with you Claire! Hardly any “Christian” movies discuss topics that would really help people. I really want to write…[Read more]
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Katja R replied to the topic Let’s talk about representation! in the forum Themes 6 years, 2 months ago
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Katja R replied to the topic Why can’t I write without guilt feelings?… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
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Katja R replied to the topic Character Name Discussion in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Here are a few. Let me know if you don’t like them and I’ll send a few more
Amelika – freedom
Gatleen – Merged in Freedom; Joined by
Gowshik – Love to Peace; Perfect; Freedom; Happiness; Life of Journey; A variant of name Gausik
Macalester – son of defender of men (Personally I like this one)A few others that don’t nesescairly have t…[Read more]
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Katja R replied to the topic Character Name Discussion in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
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Katja R started the topic Character Name Discussion in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 2 months ago
Hey Everyone!
@arindown and I had been talking about names and she suggested making a discussion about them. I have tons of names, so if anyone needs a good name for a certain time period or something just ask me. Grace also said that sometimes finding fantasy names can be a bit challenging. I have quite a few lists of fantasy names and their…[Read more]
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Thanks for your critiques! They were very helpful and I’ll try and change that soon!