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@beth20

Hey,

Thanks for your comments.

Yup, I meant off. 🙂

I didn’t realize the running thing. Thanks for pointing that out.

Yes, I have to find a synonym for explosion….but I guess what might be confusing you is that it happens twice. I’ll try to explain this. So the “bomb” explodes once in it’s location when it’s let out, then it sends out like a radio wave type of thing and then once it reach the end of the concordance it explodes. Does that help? Do you think I need to explain that more?

And the chapters are named by which person is the main character. I have four characters each will be the MC in certain chapters. I will post the next chapter now since I told y’all about that. 😀

I did find your story. I am working on writing out my comments. I ran out of time earlier. Sorry. I will post my comments in a second.

-Katja