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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
WHOA!! Has it really been THREE MONTHS since I posted in this thread?! . . .
Okay, it has.
Tell me what you all think of this poem.
Rainbow in Waterdrops
Come down…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Script Writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@ericawordsmith whoops, forgot to tag you XD I had a few snippets of advice for writing scripts up there lol
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imwritehere1920 replied to the topic GOOD MORNING ALGERNON I HOPE YOU'RE BEHAVING VERY WELL! in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 7 months ago
Hi there, and welcome back! I also sometimes disappear, but then sneak back on occasion to see what’s up. I look forward to seeing you around!
Ps. I love dragons too!! I ended up needle-felting a bunch of those little critters and now they’ve sorta taken over my closet *haha* *heeelp!*
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Lona replied to the topic GOOD MORNING ALGERNON I HOPE YOU'RE BEHAVING VERY WELL! in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 7 months ago
Hello! Welcome back! 🙂
I have read The Importance of Being Earnest, but it was awhile ago. However, I remember really enjoying it, and would like to read it ago. Or, even better, see it performed.
From what you mentioned you’re busy with, I take it you’re studying theatre. Have you played in The Importance of being…[Read more]
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Buddy J. replied to the topic GOOD MORNING ALGERNON I HOPE YOU'RE BEHAVING VERY WELL! in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 7 months ago
Good morning, oh friend. I know thee well.
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
This one is another very personal to me. Critique and enjoy!
Twenty-One
Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
For twenty-one
Weighed down by the times I have to try
I’ve never…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Okay, I guess I’ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.
Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!
True North
It seems that all the world has lost it’s…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Don’t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome!
My Morning Song (What you will say to me)
The sunlight is dawning
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Hope you all enjoy!
All of the Pieces
All of my pieces I’d scattered o’er
The cracks in the surface of my stone heart floor
All of my days were lost so empty
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
This one I have been trying to finish for over a year now. Critque and enjoy!
Resolutions
I wrote my list of resolutions
Not to create my own solutions
I want to live like my…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Merry Christmas!!
My Christmas Prayer
All the lights are hung, twinkling
Like a million stars glittering all over the walls
By the window the tree is shining
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Oh, wow! I keep forgetting about this. I am a bad thread-up-keeper . . . if there is such a word. . .
Anyway, this week’s is rather short. Just something I started singing to…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
This one is another very personal one to me. As always, critique and enjoy!!
Rest in Him
I know where there is a hushed abode
If in my life the longings are heavy load
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Here’s this week’s.
Along the lanes and the country road
Through these rugged hills the landscape comes alive
Such vivid hues of scarlet and wineBlown on the wind of a stormy…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Another more personal peom, but I hope that you all enjoy it! 🙂
Thank You for Forgiving Me
Once my life was wasted with lust, aslant in a downward slide
Once I lived like a…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Oh, dear! Sorry I forgot about this!
This week’s is one that I wrote more recently. It’s a little more personal to me than most of the other poems I have written.
As usual,…[Read more]
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Mariposa Aristeo replied to the topic Impactful Books in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@ericawordsmith I know! Everyone keeps telling me I should read them. 😂 And I always say I will—after I finish those other 365 books I want to read too. 🤪
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Mariposa Aristeo replied to the topic Impactful Books in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@ericawordsmith I have actually not read LOTR. 😉 But after reading your response, I now want to. ❤️
Ooh! I’ve heard so much about Rachel Starr Thomas! I loved the article she wrote for us at SE and have been wanting to read her books ever since. ☺️
How far along are you with Adorning the Dark? I’d love to hear what you think of it once you…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Impactful Books in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
What are yours?
Wow. I will have to look into these. Thanks!
(I will answer in a bit.) (:
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 5 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Here is another revision of one of my older poem/songs. Enjoy and critque! A
And if you have written any poetry you’d like to share, please feel free to post it here. 🙂
My…[Read more]
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