@denali-christianson made!

*steps into room with duster*

(5 hours later after the battle of the dust bunnies has been won)

*organizes papers and letters and collapses into chair, wondering if anyone will show up*

@mischievous-thwapling

@wingiby-iggiby

@denali-christianson

@joelle-stone

@kylie-wingfeather

Hello everybody

I was just wandering if…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

HIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You’re alive too!!!!

*clambers in through a trapdoor* *starts sneezing because of dust* *leaves note on the table covered in copious amounts of dust and paper, also covered in dust*

@mischievous-thwapling

@wingiby-iggiby

@jasmine

@denali-christianson

@joelle-stone

So, what now?

um… not quite. lol. She read the prequel, so to speak. She read the story of how my main protagonist’s parents got together, (which consequently was when the the main protagonist’s father killed the main antagonist’s father…. due to the blood curse as well…. so… yeah! all connected. 😮😉)

thanks.  that’s encouraging.

aw, thank…[Read more]

😲

I have found…*gasps* a language room?! I might have babbled incoherently about grammar structure when I found this place 😂. I think the phrase is “geek out”? If so, that’s what I’m going to do.

I’ve been working on a language for about ten years, but it’s been really getting refined in this past year or so. Thing is, I’m the only one who’s s…[Read more]

Hi @obrian-of-the-surface-world
And @denali-christianson

I’d just have to call it “hard-cased heartburn”…😉

😂

I HAVE NEVER MET YOU *bowls you over with a hug* WELCOME TO THE FORUM!!!!!!!! Tell me about yourself!!!! XD

*squeezes the breath out of you* your picture is Éowyn!! Hi!!! Yep, I joined recently.
I’m the Éowyn of this earth in personal…[Read more]

@denali-christianson well, I’m very curious to hear your response, because I believe you have a magic system in your story, right?

It’s not a hard line for me, but there are a few things I like to take into consideration:

1. Is the author a believer?

I’m much more likely to read a book with magic in it if the author is a believer and is…[Read more]

I recently joined SE. Time to resurrect some rooms, bwahaha! 😇😂

Would fire breathing turtles be classified as dragons, turtles, or something else? If the turtle is a dragon, and dragons aren’t turtles, could I still call it a fire breathing turtle or would it be a shelled dragon?

On a more serious note, do y’all understand villains better if y…[Read more]

@e-n-leonard

Here’s a character castle run-down:

This is where your characters get to interact with others’. You can flex your character by pushing them out of (or into!) their comfort zone, interacting with them outside of the context of your novel, or experimenting with aspects of them that you never see.

The castle itself is just a…[Read more]

Avin

No noise whatsoever, except the sound of his own footsteps. He paused.  Not natural.

He closed his eyes, trying to erase the life of a duke from his mind. Then he opened them slowly and started forward again, noiseless even though he wore hard-soled shoes. But still he grimaced at the little crunching sounds of gravel beneath his…[Read more]

oooh things just got interesting. lol … @denali-christianson , forgive me if I’m wrong, but Mori wouldn’t hesitate to try to stab Halmar…. right?  hehe

and…

haha. this made me laugh for some reason. Poor Halmar, doesn’t know Abirami’s ability yet… lol.

But great job writing! It took me by surprise. Didn’t expect that…

Ku’Aya

I…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

You were not kidding when you said that Mori was a straight up villain. Two seconds in the castle and he’s already pulling knives on people!

ANOTHER WONDERFUL LORD OF THE RINGS QUOTE! (Any quote with the word “vittles” in it is awesome)

@rose-colored-fancy

LOL, I didn’t expect Hal to start acting like the responsible e…

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@denali-christianson

that was awesome. =) I like your characters.  I will write Ku’s dream later, but just a short fun ditty in response to Mori. ;p

Abirami

So bored.

I was lying on my back again, waiting for Ku to wake up. A while ago, Enydd had woken up and walked around a bit, asked me what next, but she had gone off somewhere…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

DENALI YOU’RE BACKKKK!!!!!! I MISSED YOU AND I MISSED NIAROK!!!!!

@inkhorn

pulled Liorah and Aydin out and put Mejt (May-eet) and her older brother, Halmar (did I get his name right?) They’re both around twenty.

Yep, accurate! Halmar is twenty, Mejt is eighteen!

and has a terrible habit of making wry comments about the w…

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hahahaha. I have a poster in my classroom with Gandolph facing the balrog, on top it says “You Shall Not Pass”. and then on the bottom, it says “If You Do Not Have Your Name On Your Paper!”

lol.

Aaawwww. Sweet and awesome =)

It’s really true, though. So much of his character is him chasing after the image of his father and trying to…[Read more]