@dakota
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 5 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Anytime you are! 🙂 🙂
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Dakota joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers 6 years, 5 months ago
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 5 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This is not my usual style of poetry, but the inspiration hit so hard . . . I had to write it. Critique it heartless…[Read more]
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Dakota joined the group Poets 6 years, 5 months ago
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 5 months ago
@evelyn That’s fine! I will. 🙂
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Dakota replied to the topic Critique For The Fledgling Poet? in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 5 months ago
First I’ll that I really like all of these. They’re simple but they have a lot of meaning.
All three poems are pretty solid in rhythm. Some of the lines aren’t the same length but that’s probably what you had intended to do, so that’s not really a problem. Good on rhythm. 🙂
I think that thing that you could work on now is…[Read more]
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Dakota commented on the post, Daisy 6 years, 5 months ago
Yes, it is! Very beautiful! 🙂 Great Job!
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 5 months ago
@naiya-dyani It’s okay!! 🙂 No pressure!
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Dakota replied to the topic (ROLE PLAY) Joe Bentwood in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years, 5 months ago
@ellen-blanc Welcome to you and your charries!
@katthewriter Megyn nodded and turned to walk away. She just couldn’t’ bring herself to be so . . . intrusive, when he obviously didn’t want to talk or have her be in these woods anymore. Becuase he doesn’t want me to get hurt. She thought.
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Dakota replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years, 5 months ago
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Dakota replied to the topic The Prince Thief Roleplay Planning Thread in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years, 5 months ago
@katthewriter @ellen-blanc @e-b-raulands @jessi-rae
I don’t think Megyn shouldn’t be a problem; she’s rather have a friend than a enemy. But she will stand up for what’s right, no matter how hard it is for her.
Maybe split them up into *uhem* ‘compatible’ pairs most of the time, only having them all together for like brainstorming or in a…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Hooah in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 5 months ago
Mostly I bow hunt deer, occasionally hunting squirrels with a shotgun. I’m involved with my county 4-h Shooting sports club as a coordinator.
Jack: “Mostly I keep Alan from killing himself!” *laughs* “Since we’re both firemen, that means I have my hands full.”
*Alan jerks up at the sounds of his name, excuses himself from the…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 5 months ago
Jim: (Nigel) “Not a professional rider, but I’ve ridden a few.”
ME: “He can do pretty much anything cowboy, ‘cuz he is one.” (I can brag about him even if he won’t) 🙂
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Dakota replied to the topic [ROLE PLAY] The Prince Thief in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years, 5 months ago
With her head still down and turned, the girl wiggled her arm from Megyn, and forced herself to her feet. She took a shaky step away from them, holding onto the wall, seeming to be ignoring anything they say to her.
“Wait!” Megyn sprang up and wrapped her arms around her, trying to be mindful of the wounded shoulder.…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 5 months ago
Okay, I’m done.
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Dakota replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years, 5 months ago
@esther-sears Okay, here she is:
Megyn Primrose Harris – 16 years old. Short, with a slender form and small hands. Hair’s a medium chestnut brown, soft and thick with little curls at the ends. Eyes are large and hazel brown. Her expression is usually one of modest and friendly curiosity. Loves to sing and make music; horses, though she doesn’t o…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 5 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Okee dokee! I’m working on it . . .
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Dakota replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years, 5 months ago
@esther-sears I am ready! Should we just plunge ahead into the RP or would you wants us to introduce our characters first?
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Dakota replied to the topic The Prince Thief Roleplay Planning Thread in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years, 5 months ago
@e-b-raulands @jessi-rae @ellen-blanc @katthewriter
The vote is unanimous. I say ‘Aye!’
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 5 months ago
<p style=”text-align: left;”>@andrew Very nice!! I like the vivid word choice and the vigorous personification you gave the 🌻. Good work! 🙂</p>
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