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@the-fledgling-artist

First I’ll that I really like all of these. They’re simple but they have a lot of meaning.

All three poems are pretty solid in rhythm. Some of the lines aren’t the same length but that’s probably what you had intended to do, so that’s not really a problem. Good on rhythm. 🙂

I think that thing that you could work on now is the alliteration and assonance. That’s not to say that your lines sound bad; some of them have those two elements. But I think you should explore those areas more.

Overall, very good and keep going!!! 🙂 🙂