here’s mine: https://mailchi.mp/2375cccb65a5/r2w1u0mmuj

I have no idea what I’m doing so if that doesn’t work please let me…[Read more]

(If any of y’all want me to stop tagging them here just let me know)

This is a possible prologue I wrote and rewrote and edited and here I am writing it again:

“I hate that feeling. The feeling that this is happening, that this is real. The feeling that e…[Read more]

Nice to meet you too! So far SE has been great.

Yes I was on CWW 🙂

thank you! It’s been really fun to write so far. I’m only writing the rough draft right now. Esthelle, my main chara, was just chosen to be Queen.

Yours sounds so cool !

Do you know how to make a new page on here? If you do, could you tell me, ’cause I want to, but I can’t figure it out.

Okay cool! I will post the second chapter sometime! Thank you for your suggestions, I will try and keep that in mind! Thanks for responding!

-Beth

I have read and watched all of them haha! There are three boys and four girls (including me)!

Also how come when I respond, the @however, isn’t blue? If that makes sense lol.

@naiya-dyani

Wow, that’s an amazing story. And don’t let the fact that you can’t pinpoint the day you were saved scare you. I can’t either.

Thank you so much!

Don’t know if I could pronounce Hebrew well, though. . .

That’s okay, pronunciation isn’t the most important thing when learning new language.…[Read more]

For an info dump to grab readers attention, it has to be important. One of the best ways to make a bunch of information meaningful is by adding emotion.

Perhaps a scale-covered wolf the size of a horse inhabits the woods somewhere in your MC’s world. You need to tell readers that…[Read more]

Ok friends, how’s your…[Read more]

I tho…[Read more]

Hey guys!

Anyone want to pitch in and help with the submission?…[Read more]

Thank you guys for your submissions! 😀 It was a tie, so I had to break it. So, #1 is…[Read more]

I…[Read more]

Last chance to add submissions! All votes will be needed by tomorrow night so we can…[Read more]

Hey guys! I forgot to create a google doc for you all. Please put all…[Read more]

You guys have come up with some great ideas so far! I think it’s about…[Read more]

Sorry it took me so long to post another theme topic XD. Today I have a question for you inspired by a book called, The Emotional Craft of Fiction.

Do you think fear can hinder us from imbuing our stories emotion? If so, how?

@fawxofthecomics @toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @supermonkey42  @naomijackson @melissa-g @aislinn-mo…[Read more]

*beats massive drums*

*sounds horn of war*

*raises bow*

It’s time for…[Read more]

Happy…[Read more]

Hey…[Read more]

@sarah-inkdragon  @sarah-narnathron …[Read more]

I completely forgot to lay out what our guild actually is for the new recruits *facepalm*. So, here’s a brief outline of what we do here:

What’s the purpose of the guilds?

The purpose of the guilds is to foster a small community of writers who can encourage and strengthen each other.

Here are all the subcategories of Ave…[Read more]

Quite a few of you made goals last week. Did you reach them? What are…[Read more]

Hey Avensers!

We’ve got a bunch of new guildlings joining us! Please…[Read more]

Hey Avensers!

This is an important announcement so please take…[Read more]

The time for goals has come! What did you a…[Read more]

A while back I found this quote in a book about fiction and emotion, and it hit me pretty hard:

“When readers feel strongly, their hearts are o…

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I think most of us were on vacation or too busy for g…[Read more]

I have another little exercise for ya.

Emotional reactions are often connected to what we value. When something we hold dear is insulted, it evokes a strong emotional reaction.  That said, what characters get emotional about should be directly tied to what they value.

Say your character Phil loves unicorns and has dedicated many…[Read more]

Did you guys reach your goals last week? Do you have…[Read more]

Different cultures have different standards for emotional expression. For instance, some societies may prize nobility and honor and encourage taming emotions that may undermine those ideals. One might encourage emotional reactions to misfortunes, while another might suppress even justified sorrow or anger because they expect their…[Read more]

We’ve created a quick survey we’d love for you to take a few moments to fill out. We want to know how we can improve guilds and really value your feedback. Here’s the link: https://goo.gl/forms/WwDPMP2ITpV8obvf1

Thanks guys!

@fawxofthecomics @toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwr…[Read more]

As for me, I’d like to work on both my WIPs an hour each every day this week (excluding Sunday).

@fawxofthecomics @toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson…[Read more]

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer  @martina  @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law0413 @claire @christianna-hellwig @zanzibee @libby

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law041…[Read more]

How does prose affect what readers are able to feel when they read? How does cadence and rhythm impact mood? How do you use prose to sharpen your story’s emotional impact?

Feel free to post any epic thoughts that occur to you. 🙂

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42…[Read more]

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law0413 @claire…[Read more]

Sorry for my absence. I thought I would have time to check on you guys, but the conference I was at was insane (and I may or may not have forgotten my password at home. 😛 )

Anyway, I’m just here to remind you that the final guild submission is due tomorrow, so if you could edit it by then, I’ll take it to the judge around…[Read more]

Guys!  @toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law0413 @claire @zanzibee @libby @natalie-marie

I am the only one who has submitted anything…[Read more]

Summoning all Avengers (or whatever you call yourselves…[Read more]

I was a bad guild master and forgot about last week’s theme discussion. Whoops. 😛

Anyhow, this week I’d like to discuss why we shouldshouldn’t evoke shock in readers. It’s an emotion, so it sorta counts. 😉

Now, I am not referring to the sort of shock readers feel after an amazing plot twist. I’m talking about the horror or disbelief…[Read more]

How’s writing going? Did you meet your goals last week? What are your goals for this week?

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law0413 @claire…[Read more]

Ok friends! Please submit any pieces you wrote up…[Read more]

Great ideas, guys! If you have a piece you’d like us…[Read more]

The third guild war is upon us!

Our mission, should you chose to accept it, is to write a scene from the point of view of a five-year-old who has an engaging character voice.

The prompt is due in two weeks. I don’t have to judge this one, so I’m here to help whenever you need it.

Now let’s get some ideas rolling! 😀

Here’s a…[Read more]

What did you achieve during these last two weeks? What are your goals for this week?

@toklaham-veruzia @overcomer @martina @epicaddie2 @supermonkey42 @gabrielle @snapper @jenwriter17 @naomijackson @dekreel @bonnie @melissa-g @kiraelizabeth @aislinn-mollisong @dragongeek @haviloki @sleepwalkingmk @sam-kowal @law0413 @claire @christianna-…[Read more]

Welcome to Avensbeck, my fellow Avensers.

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If you get a chance, tell us about your WIP’s.

Also, @christianna-hellwig, have you written any more music since you joined Kingdom Pen?