Taylor Clogston

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Thanks! I like physics. 😉 And writing. So combine them we must. XD

@taylorclogston sure! I went into Docs and left a few suggestions. While there I realized the misspellings weren’t yours, so I apologize for saying that. I really loved your style of telling the story, and I hope you don’t change it too much 😀 Good luck!

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Lots of description and show don’t tell! (That’s like Daeus’ fav) You had some,  but maybe its just me that puts it all over?  Idk….

First week without my friend…

@taylorclogston Wow! I was completely drawn into your story. Like I only meant to open the document and glance at it but ended up reading feverishly to the end in a few minutes lol. Some grammar stuff and misspelled words distracted me every once in a while, but the idea and your development of it were solid and captivating. Do you read through…[Read more]

@taylorclogston woooow that was way better than anything i could write! Pretty good!

Though.. you didn’t do much of my fav part of writing..

@gabrielwoods Exactly what @taylorclogston said. 👍 There definitely needs to be perfect communication for a co-authored book. Also, Gabriel, good idea about keeping him updated with ideas (LOL). You don’t want to be too “pushy,” so I think keeping him updated with ideas would keep the book on his mind. 🙂

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I would look at repeated words within the same sentence or paragraph. I feel you are trying to do this for emphasis, but it comes off as a little distracting. Try to eliminate unnecessary words to tighten the story.  Press on in your writing!

@taylorclogston thank you. I will try to keep him updated and tell him to keep me updated about ideas and stuff.

@taylorclogston I think that you should mention more of his surroundings, and maybe something about the service. Perhaps have him think that something the pastor said would contradict his secret.

but I think that you wouldn’t necessarily have to add anything. It’s up to you

@bama-rose Yeah, I’ve noticed that about fantasy here, so it’s kind of fun that now we can get the contemporary writers together. 😆 And ahhhh, I just love it that you’re writing about foster families!! Some of my brothers are adopted and there’s just not enough books about that.

@katthewriter Quarter horses, all the way, but I mostly ride Arabian…[Read more]

@taylorclogston I’m not good at critiquing short stories since my mind’s wired for longer ones but…I’m all for writing about the hard stuff and wow. I loved and hated that all at the same time in such a good way. Keep it up.