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@daeus-lamb

Thanks.  But i don’t think there is anyway.  Idk what to do with Unknown. You probably don’t remember, but when you were doing your Show Dont Tell course for the first time you let people send you like 500 long pieces to see if it had SDT, and i gave you end of the first chapter. I think you said it was pretty good in that aspect?

Its only 7 chapters long, 2 for Katie once for Eero. But now i have to write Eero and idk if i can. Cuz i want him to be alot like he was but tweaked maybe a little?

But her writing was way better than mine, and she helped my writing be better so this was the one book i knew i could actually publish.  But now. . Maybe nothing. Anyway i’d get so much backlash with her keeping the baby.  Katie was sexualky abused in her past so in the book she gets pregnant, Eero takes her in cuz she’s on the run, and line convinces her to keep the baby.  And alot of other stuff happen that i had planned out. Like its oldish so l abortions arnt really as much of a thing so she’s more like just wanting to kill herself.  The theme is kinda forgivness? Like Katie has to forgive and let go of the hurt everyone did to her. And Eero has to forgive those who murdered his family and let go of his worries that he won’t be good enough for his siblings? I wasnt much in Eero’s head becausr it was Aly’s character.  But yeah so much backlash being pro-life from  rape of a 15 year old girl.  But why should the innocent child get a death sentance? The Rapest should.  And idk if I’m bold enough to put something that might get destoyed when (or if ) it gets out there.  It was diff when i had my best friend as my partner….

@naiya-dyani

Oh. Okay.  Thanks!

@taylorclogston