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December 19, 2019 at 12:02 am #102895Katthewriter@katthewriter
I just had this inspiration and wrote this a few minutes ago. Its not long or fancy, but now you can be even more sad for her xD
@kari-karast @naiya-dyani @dakota @bama-rose @jane-mareeI keep my head down as a shuffle my load of books to my locker. Even with my head down and black hood hiding my face kids jump out of my way. Boys jokingly shove each other to me, while the girls squeal in fear, as if I had the plaque.
I swallow hard as I unlock my locker, feeling all eyes on me.
“There’s the freak!”
“Watch out, it’s the monster girl.”
“Hey, monster girl, what did you do? Put your face in a blender?”
There was the sound of high fives, and girls snickering.
Fighting tears, I slammed my locker shut and hurry to my next class. My heart hammers in my head so loud it hurts, my eyes trained to the floor.
I try to ignore them. But i can’t. It was just as impossible as trying to ignore the scars covering my body. I can’t hide from them.
December 19, 2019 at 12:03 am #102896Katthewriter@katthewriterDecember 19, 2019 at 12:17 am #102897Veraza Winterknight@kari-karastOof. Poor child. I’m getting really intrigued about her scars though.
December 19, 2019 at 1:32 am #102900Katthewriter@katthewriterDecember 19, 2019 at 1:54 pm #102910Dakota@dakota@katthewriter Poor thing! I enjoyed reading it but . . . It is still sad.
Psalm 119:11
Your word I have hidden in my heart,
That I might not sin against You.December 19, 2019 at 4:42 pm #102932Katthewriter@katthewriterDecember 19, 2019 at 10:26 pm #102942Jane Maree@jane-maree@katthewriter Nooooooooo! 😭💔
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December 21, 2019 at 9:18 am #103034Emberynus The Dragonslayer@emberynus-the-dragonslayerDecember 22, 2019 at 4:16 pm #103081Katthewriter@katthewriter@dakota thanks xD
@jane-maree *evil laugh*
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer 🙂 I’ll tag you when i do another if you want.December 26, 2019 at 11:58 pm #103220Katthewriter@katthewriter@kari-karast @naiya-dyani @dakota @bama-rose @jane-maree @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
I’m indecisive and can’t decide what the next Yuri snippet should be on. I’m open for suggestions. Granted i may or may not get to it, or do it depending on what it is but you may give your idea or you can choose from one of these, to have a little fun.
Like school cafeteria?
Riding on the bus?
Homework at foster home?
Having to be pared with someone for a school project, and have to go to thier house?
Getting invited to a party and it just ends up kids making show of her?
Late night thoughts and nightmares?
December 27, 2019 at 12:05 am #103222Katthewriter@katthewriterDecember 28, 2019 at 10:09 am #103258Dakota@dakota@katthewriter All of those sound interesting but I think I’ll vote for having to be paired with someone for a school project.
Psalm 119:11
Your word I have hidden in my heart,
That I might not sin against You.December 30, 2019 at 9:05 am #103285Emberynus The Dragonslayer@emberynus-the-dragonslayerJanuary 2, 2020 at 4:36 pm #103410Candide@candideI chose “Late night thoughts and nightmare”. Later, she can “revange herself in true life”, living things that meant the oposite of her thoughts and nigthmares.
Oh, If I could, I would invite her to go to some beach and just forget this smalminded school people!
January 10, 2020 at 10:16 pm #103652Katthewriter@katthewriter@dakota good cuz that’s what i picked
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer of course! 😀<p style=”text-align: left;”>@candide ah sorry i have already choosen a 4 or 5 part series of getting paired with the richest most popular girl in school for a project.</p>
But in the future there will be some nightmares that give you lil peep holes into the past.Would you like me to tag you when i post new snippets?
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