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Caseybold replied to the topic “Which You Have Ordained” Critique in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 6 years, 3 months ago
@taylorclogston Wow! I was completely drawn into your story. Like I only meant to open the document and glance at it but ended up reading feverishly to the end in a few minutes lol. Some grammar stuff and misspelled words distracted me every once in a while, but the idea and your development of it were solid and captivating. Do you read through your stories out loud after you’ve finished writing? If not that might be a good exercise to polish things up and make sure everything sounds right. Thanks for sharing this! I really enjoyed it 😀










