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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War : A Happy Ending…Minus the Cliché in the forum Announcements 7 years, 2 months ago
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@silverclaw-bonnetfollyI would be VERY careful with the idea of a fairytale. It really is seriously likely to fall under cliché too easily.
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Julia replied to the topic Guild War : A Happy Ending…Minus the Cliché in the forum Announcements 7 years, 2 months ago
@trufflehunter Good point!
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Awww that could be cute! What if Rapunzel was stuck in her tower for so long that her hair grew super long, not because a witch trapped her, but because she was afraid of heights? 😂 That was the next thing that came to me when I read the prompt 😛
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Guild War : A Happy Ending…Minus the Cliché in the forum Announcements 7 years, 2 months ago
Parimis. The first guild war of 2019 has arrived! And I’ve got a good feeling about this one. (As in, we’re going to love it and go crazy.)
Prompt: Write a story with an Unclichéd Happy Ending. (BITTERSWEET ENDINGS DON’T COUNT.)
Word Limit: 2500
Starts: *awkward cough* Apparently Monday 4th EST
Ends: Monday 18th EST
(So s…[Read more]
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Cassie Hartfinh started the topic 23 Things Authors Say in the forum Announcements 7 years, 2 months ago
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@kaladinstormblessedHey, everyone!! I just wanted to announce that a couple friends and I just made a video titled “23 Things Authors Say”. Feel free to check it out, and…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Characters | Lesson 4 : The Other Side in the forum 7 years, 2 months ago
A lot of the time, characters are written so that they are 100% good or bad. The protagonist is perfect, good looking, and maybe he has mild claustrophobia as a weakness. The villain is evil, kills puppies and shoots up old ladies in his spare time, and maybe every now and then he tortures someone who spilt his coffee instead of killing them.
If…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Characters | Lesson 3 : The Motive in the forum 7 years, 3 months ago
The motive of your character is important. The motive is what drives your character forward, and makes every scene feel strong and meaningful. The character’s motive is what brings about the theme, and what pushes the plot along. Your plot is driven by your character’s motive. Therefore, the character motive could be the most important f…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston started the topic Check In – January Week 4 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
What I read – Emmanuel by Angela R. Watts, some of The Fall of Gondolin by J.R.R. Tolkien, WAR by Sebastian Junger, Homeland: Legend of Drizzt: Dark Elf Trilogy, Book 1 by R.A. Salvatore, some of Haroun and the Sea of Stories by Salman Rushdie
What I wrote – Concept and some paragraphs of a short story I intend to submit to SE, some copywork of T…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Characters | Lesson 2 : The Basics in the forum 7 years, 3 months ago
I’m planning on treating this topic as a mini way of making sure that we all can get a fair idea of everything about characters from the super easy things, to the hard things that we all struggle with. (If you don’t, then goodness. Please teach me.)
Pretty much, the first thing I wanted to talk about is going back to the very basics of what a…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic No Lesson this Week, and Some Changes in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
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PursueWisdom replied to the topic Check In – January Week 2 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
Wonderful discussion topic, sir! 🙂 Much thanks – this should help keep me more accountable in terms of my writing/reading.
What I Read: I’m currently reading The Brothers Karamazov and The Fiddler’s Gun by A.S. Peterson. Both are wonderful. I’ve not yet finished with either one yet though.
Also, I’ve been listening to an…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle started the topic What do y'all think of my current WIP? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
First off, I’m not sure if I’m doing this right…. :p Creating a topic, I mean. I’ve never done this, so if this is wrong, sorry! XD (and sorry if I missed tagging someone I should’ve… I still need to find like a list of people or something, lol)
So I started this short story, I suppose it is, on a whim yesterday night because I wanted to…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Characters | Lesson 1 : What do You Know? in the forum 7 years, 3 months ago
Happy new year guys!
To be frankly honest, I was not expecting so much to have changed between this time last year and now. I mean, Story Ember’s didn’t even exist then. But anyways. That’s not what this lesson is about.
Before I get stuck into our new topic, I’d love everyone to tell me what they think about a few things. As you know, I’m…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston started the topic Check In – January Week 2 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
What I read – I finished reading Dune, started reading The Confession by John Grisham, Tenemental by Vikki Warner, and American Military History by Wesley K. Clark via The Great Courses. I picked up or was gifted a ton more book (biography, drama, essay, fantasy, magical realism, military scifi) but I doubt I’ll be reading these over the next t…[Read more]
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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic Parimi Alca Creed in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@j-a-penrose @evelyn @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @esjohnson @ariella-newheart @steward-of-the-pen Sorry I haven’t been active in the forums much lately, everyone. I’m outta school now, trying to think where to get a full-time job, praying for peace in my family, and trying to grow in my faith as well. Life hits hard. Y’know. But I thought I should at…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic A General Apology in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
Well, you may have gathered this, but us guildmasters are now all seriously thinking about what we can be doing to help improve the guilds, and make them more active. I can clearly see that things have been lagging in Parimi Alca, and how it could actually be becoming more of a burden than it is a help.
If you are struggling with this in this…[Read more]
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Selah CJW started the topic A Matter of Life and Death… in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@ethryndal @bama-rose @raemarie @corissa @kate @r-m-archer @literatureforthelight @j-parkhurst @gabbyj @cassandraia @chalice @noahlitle @julianne @germaine-han @maddiejay @sesi @r-j-karas @rosemarylouise @msqueen8 @samuel @eden-anderson @professorsjb @elizabeth @scarletimmortalized @parker @katthewriter @taylorclogston Cool thread! 😀
I have been wanting to read Dune for a while now, but haven’t gotten around to it. 😛 Do you like it so far?
That’s really neat! 🙂
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What I have read
I have read a lot in 2018 – too much to all write out, (and I’m having trouble thinking of them all 😛 ) but included in the list are: Agatha Christie…[Read more]
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PursueWisdom replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 4 months ago
Hi all!!
I’m not sure if you’ve seen this…
BUT WE WERE GIVEN AN HONORABLE MENTION IN THIS WAR!!!
See https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cELNYNDhdM5o1DcXvFwxkTE29p7MnZtcRzRobNuExzY/edit#
I found that Daeus’s feedback was super helpful – so please read it! 🙂
Anyway, thanks especially to ESJohnson (for doing most of the writing) and Darth…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Holiday Announcement in the forum 7 years, 4 months ago
We have been going for twenty-eight weeks now. Can I just say, that is insane. I honestly wasn’t expecting the guilds to take off like they did, but now, I’m definitely sold to it.
But anyways. I just wanted to tell you that there will be no more lessons from me until 2019. (I know. Huge break.) We’ll be looking at characters, and I think th…[Read more]
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ESJohnson replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 4 months ago
Also, I’m thinking what if Aleksander’s Son attacks before he has a chance to march out? That means the spirits lied and he now has to make a choice for or against them. Any thoughts?
(And @coggleton , I was going for that David/Absalom vibe…[Read more]
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