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Sam M replied to the topic You Are in the forum Poets 5 years, 3 months ago
Hi, Kimmi! I really like your poem. 🙂 Some of my favorite lines were: “Do you not know, you rival the stars? Do you not know, who you are?”
Thanks for sharing!
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Sam M replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 5 years, 4 months ago
Would you rather be a sleepwalker or never be able to sleep?
Judah: I’d rather be a sleepwalker. I’m already a borderline insomniac and I’d rather it not get worse. Besides, the trouble I’d get into could hardly be worse than the stuff I get into when I’m awake.
Lauren: Sleepwalker. That could be interesting.
Kaz: Ugh. I’d hate to be a…[Read more]
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Sam M replied to the topic Favorite Fantasy Book in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
I love The Keeper of the Lost Cities series. (The suggest reader age range is 8-12, but I’m twenty-years-old and am dying to read the newest one). 🙂 My favorite character is undeniably the unforgettable Keefe Sencen. He’s also the reason I love the series.
I also love the Harry Potter series.
Romanov and Fawkes, both by Nadine Brandes, were…[Read more]
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Sam M replied to the topic Your Story's Big Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@zee Thanks for posting this thread! I really like this. Here’s mine:
How should you treat an enemy?
What does it mean to love an enemy?
What is the difference between justice and revenge?
What is forgiveness?
How can a person forgive someone else?
How can a person forgive themselves and/or accept forgiveness from someone else?
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Sam M replied to the topic Drowning in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Hi, Beth. You did a great job of writing an emotional piece in masterfully concise way. I like you’re writing style and thought it was cool how you ended the poem with a thought-provoking question. Great job!
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Sam M replied to the topic I Would Be in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, I can see now how that would be confusing. Thanks for the feedback! 🙂
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Sam M replied to the topic The Party Tree in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Hi, Jenny! I like your vivid writing style and how the first lines of each stanza were parallel to each other. The way you ended it was cool too. I can’t think of any recommendations for improvement. Sorry. 🙂 It looked great to me.
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Sam M replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 5 years, 5 months ago
Would you rather snitch on your best friend for a crime they committed or go to gaol for the crime they committed?
Judah: I think it would depend on a lot of different factors. Like what the crime was, how long the sentence was, and whether I thought they would survive jail or prison… *glances at Kaz and thinks about how he’ll do in prison* I…[Read more]
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Sam M replied to the topic The Snare in the forum Poets 5 years, 5 months ago
Thanks, Lona!
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Sam M started the topic The Snare in the forum Poets 5 years, 5 months ago
Hey, everybody. Feel free to leave me some feedback on my poem. What do you think I can do better? 🙂
The Snare
The Bible declares that fear of man is a snare,
And this truth matches my experience,
I know it’s real as I’m hearing this.
For a dozen times I can be fine,
And the journey goes pretty well,
But I still think about when I’l…[Read more]
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Sam M replied to the topic I Would Be in the forum Poets 5 years, 5 months ago
Thanks, Eitan! 🙂
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Sam M replied to the topic A poem – I want to weep in the forum Poets 5 years, 6 months ago
Great job on your poem, Eitan! I love how your poems are filled with truth and end with hope. 🙂
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Sam M replied to the topic Whats the title of your book and explain it in 3 sentances @Everyone in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Your story idea is awesome! I would love to read something like that!
Superpowers and time travel are two of my favorite things! Good luck with your story, it sounds super cool!
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Sam M replied to the topic Whats the title of your book and explain it in 3 sentances @Everyone in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Your story idea is awesome! I would love to read something like that!
Superpowers and time travel are two of my favorite things! Good luck with your story, it sounds super cool!
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Sam M replied to the topic Greetings Other Humans (I think) in the forum Horror writers 5 years, 6 months ago
@law0413 Your grandfather sounds awesome!
Thanks! Who knows…maybe I’ll work up the nerve to post a section of it on the forum some time. 🙂
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Sam M replied to the topic Greetings Other Humans (I think) in the forum Horror writers 5 years, 6 months ago
Hi, Laurel. 🙂 Your story sounds super interesting! I’m especially intrigued by the psychological part. I love mysteries. Incidentally, I’m working on a mystery novel right now, where the protagonist is trying to solve his parents murder and take down the crime boss who killed them (and a lot of other people).
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Sam M replied to the topic I Would Be in the forum Poets 5 years, 6 months ago
I actually ended up using a different, but similar, poem for the contest. Thank you so much for the encouragement! 🙂
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Sam M started the topic I Would Be in the forum Poets 5 years, 6 months ago
Hey, everybody. So, here’s a poem I wrote. Feel free to offer feedback if you want to. 🙂
I Would Be
The person I was and am isn’t who I want to be.
Who would I be if nothing stopped me?
If all my weaknesses, fears,
All my sins disappeared.
And I could begin again.
I would seek mercy and justice.
And my hypocrisy? I would bust it.
I w…[Read more]
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Sam M replied to the topic A poem – Alone in the night of darkness in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago
@eitan I love this poem. 🙂 I specifically like, “O my Lord, heal my heart, and let your love be in me.” Thank you for sharing this!
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Sam M replied to the topic Greetings Other Humans (I think) in the forum Horror writers 5 years, 7 months ago
Hi, Laurel. 🙂 Your story sounds interesting. What’s it’s about?
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