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Sam M started the topic I Would Be in the forum Poets 5 years, 7 months ago
Hey, everybody. So, here’s a poem I wrote. Feel free to offer feedback if you want to. 🙂
I Would Be
The person I was and am isn’t who I want to be.
Who would I be if nothing stopped me?
If all my weaknesses, fears,
All my sins disappeared.
And I could begin again.
I would seek mercy and justice.
And my hypocrisy? I would bust it.
I would be shield between the hurting and villains.
And my pride? I would kill it.
I would be compassionate to victims.
And my jealousy? It’d be evicted.
I would submit to humiliation and pain,
Having my dreams stolen away,
If it meant saving a stranger’s soul.
No matter my personal toll.
I would never be offended on my own behalf,
But injustice would always make my soul ache.
I would do everything right on the first draft.
My history wouldn’t be drenched in mistakes.
I would forgive in a second,
My love would be strong and
I would treat every human as a child of the Lord.
As for the world? I’d stop wanting more.
I would give with abandon,
And my greed would vanish,
My heart would be focused on those suffering and famished.
I would look at life with honesty,
No matter the pain it might cause me.
I would act on my convictions.
Never kneel to the enemy’s restrictions.
I wouldn’t stray,
I wouldn’t wander,
I wouldn’t work my own agenda,
I would pray,
I would ponder,
I would seek Your will forever.
Truth would rule in my mind,
And hope would shine without ceasing,
Faith would reign, never decreasing,
It would be stronger than an avalanche,
I wouldn’t stop hoping in that second chance.
I wouldn’t give up on monsters,
Not even myself.
I would seek the good of others,
I wouldn’t seek wealth.
My love would be blind
To enemy lines.
I would endure suffer to save an enemy,
I would give compassion to those against me.
I would care more about humanity,
Than what they thought of me.
I would keep my eyes on You,
And find peace.
That’s what I dream of:
To be free.
I’d remember that I’m your artwork, your servant,
Your child above all else.
I never would’ve hiked a thousand miles towards hell.
I would have courage and honor.
My love would be so much stronger.
I would consult Wisdom,
And build with purpose,
I know I haven’t done everything I should’ve.
The person I was and am isn’t who I want to be.
But You can transform me.
My past is a land of human experience,
My present can be a training ground,
Where better patterns can be found,
Where I can build up humility and fearlessness,
Learn wisdom, love, and perseverance,
Where I can be honest and remember:
Your love -relentless and tender,
Your forgiveness redeeming me,
Your grace remaking me,
Your faithfulness never leaving me.
My hope remains that I can change.
That this isn’t how I’ll end.










