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Selah CJW replied to the topic Weekly Scripture 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
😀 That is the only one I have seen the trailer too, so yes! It seems really neat, and their sister production, Beyond the Mask, is totally amazing!! Have you seen it?
Thank you for sharing the thoughts and Scriptures with us! It is so easy to lose focus on what is most important, and yours was a true reminder. Thank you! 🙂
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Selah CJW replied to the topic Weekly Scripture 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
Awesome! BTW, is your penname from the movie Pendragon?!
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Selah CJW replied to the topic Weekly Scripture 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
I had you for the 14th, 3 days ago, so do you want to do this next Monday instead as that got messed up?! 🙂 (That would be this next Monday, January the 21st.)
Can you do the next week instead of this one, so January 28th? Thx for your patience with me, ya’ll!
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papergirlsfb started the topic The Good, the Bad, and the Morally Delayed in the forum 7 years, 3 months ago
Following advice here, and posting my own ‘topic’.
Sorry about that, @pendragon ! I still don’t know my way around here yet.
As you might’ve guessed, my book title is called ‘The Good, the Bad, and the Morally Delayed’. I’m hoping to get it done by the next school…[Read more]
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Chalice replied to the topic Weekly Scripture 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
Alright everyone, I guess it’s my turn to do this. 🙂
This verse really stuck out to me when I was battling fear. I’m talking irrational, keep-me-awake-at-night fear. It was bad. I was especially struggling one night, and just felt like I was just being attacked by my fears, when I remembered this verse:
You are a hiding-place for me,
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Welcome to Apprentice Island! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
Well, attendance seems to be sparse in this guild. I’d love to see it thrive, but a community needs people.
Heads up! Unfortunately, I’ll have to remove some people if they don’t make an appearance. I also plan to add some new people soon.
@theclumsy_lamplighter @aborland @mnvalentine @mistyemerald @joysparrow @wanderingsamurai15 @heather-rose @e…[Read more]
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papergirlsfb replied to the topic Dear Diary in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
I really liked it! I would totally write more backstory if I were you. I know that would be hard, because it already states that the reason that she starts this diary is because of the grandfathers death, and that in turn is the reason the book is written.
I really would like to see this as a full-blown book, too.
Sincerely,
Sylvie
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Selah CJW replied to the topic Weekly Scripture 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@eden-anderson  If you do not mind, you are first, so you have Monday next week, the 17th.
@chalice You have the 24th….tell me if that is too close to Christmas and you want to be switched! 🙂
@parker You have the 31st of Dec. If that is okay….
@seekjustice 7th of January in the new year!
@h-jones January 14th, a month from my sis…[Read more]
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mistyemerald replied to the topic Dear Diary in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@pendragon… oh, I love a good sailing tale, and this is quite promising!
I am not very good at this sort of thing, but I shall toss in my two cents :).So I really love the overall feel of the story, and I love your descriptions (especially, ‘I crouched down beside the grave, my fingers sinking into the muddy dirt.’ I think the culminating of…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Welcome to Apprentice Island! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
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Selah CJW replied to the topic Any beta readers out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
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Selah CJW replied to the topic Any beta readers out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
I got it! Thanks so much!
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Buddy J. replied to the topic Do Teen Guys Cry? (help me out please) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Yeah… I could do that. Not a bad idea.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Any beta readers out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@pendragon Thank you so much! I can access it from the link. Do you still want my email address?
@seekjustice Yeah, I got such a kick out of how you used the word “bloke” in your dystopian!
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Chelsea R.H. replied to the topic Any beta readers out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Basically @ashira summed it up. You just choose a certain amount of readers and you ask them to critique aspects of your story.
Just be warned though, if the majority of your readers are American you’ll find yourself questioning words and phrases you’ve used since birth (one of my readers got really stuck on the word “budgie”) 😛 😛
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Selah CJW replied to the topic Any beta readers out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
I would love to! Mostly it is just a matter of asking people to read it, and then emailing them the link to your Google Doc if you want them to beta read it. 🙂
And you do not have to choose everyone… 😛
My email is needleworksbyselah@gmail.com if you want me to!
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Andrew Schmidt replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@millennium-m @pendragon @scarletimmortalized @everybody-else
Delton groaned, making his way through the castle, disappearing through the dark shadows and appearing in some of the other nearby places. He could almost feel Miss Werlog’s gaze on him, pointing a bony, white finger and saying, “Don’t be late for your dream, Delton Gray.”
Then…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Any beta readers out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@pendragon I would like to beta read/critique it if you like!
(*whispers* besides, Aussies use funny words sometimes and its entertaining)
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Jane Maree replied to the topic *tries to think of a creative title* Um… hi? in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years, 4 months ago
@pendragon I’m eastern NSW! (a few hours inland from Sydney, so if you’re ever up this way… 😉 )
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic *tries to think of a creative title* Um… hi? in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years, 4 months ago
G’DAY MATE! @pendragon (Never say that one normally, but y’know)
Yes! More Aussies!!!!
I be an NSW Aussie, you?
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