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mistyemerald replied to the topic Poem In Progress in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
Haha @papergirlsfb I totally get it. I love peotry, but am not very good at it 🙂 Did you happen to notice the theme? It was supposed to be death – that was my interest in practicing understatement. Thanks for your time!
-Misty
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mistyemerald started the topic Poem In Progress in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
I was working on some understatement for this poem. If you get the chance, tell me what you think! I am not great at poetry, so any help would be fantastic. It’s not very cheerful, so wait until after Christmas:) Have a merry Christmas, all.
But no, he still is sleeping
He was sleeping under the curdled stars
And the summer air was thick.
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mistyemerald replied to the topic Written by an enemy in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Oh, certainly. I love a good villain-and-protagonist duo with rich history and a complicated back-story. I am not great at writing a really involved villain however. Do you have any tips? I do work to write from their perspective and involve a complex character among my evil crew – but I always feel like they end up good in the end. That is fine f…[Read more]
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mistyemerald replied to the topic Dear Diary in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
@pendragon… oh, I love a good sailing tale, and this is quite promising!
I am not very good at this sort of thing, but I shall toss in my two cents :).So I really love the overall feel of the story, and I love your descriptions (especially, ‘I crouched down beside the grave, my fingers sinking into the muddy dirt.’ I think the culminating of…[Read more]
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