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I was working on some understatement for this poem. If you get the chance, tell me what you think! I am not great at poetry, so any help would be fantastic. It’s not very cheerful, so wait until after Christmas:) Have a merry Christmas, all.

But no, he still is sleeping

He was sleeping under the curdled stars
And the summer air was thick.
The breath that seeped from his split
Lips buzzed.

Thickly soaking the thermos-silk
Quilting
of summer.
His eyes were lidded heavily in shimmering,
Milky sweat.

Fairy lights hummed over his cheeks
And purple veins wrinkled the drooping sky.
The trees were humming, dazed.

Dizzying.

Philosophy.

Did those trees grow their creeping beards in now,
Or was it just last century.
Can you hear the evil muttering.
Is it Cthulhu.

but no, he is sleeping

He sleeps, drunk on heat liqueur.
His mind is shrouded in silk worm lace.

~Hemingway wrote of Silkworms. They ate outside his window~

Or the fairie lights dissolving through his skin
Are poling him across some ancient river.
Charon poles his ragged Souls
Across the river Styx.

There is no stink of death tonight.
Only the lavender smell of dying.
Red goggle-eyes and leather beaks
And broad-brimmed hats and crying.

And the moon drips foul, skulking yellow molds.

What a new face she has in summer.
So old and sickening gold.
Just a few months back her dimpled cheeks
Were fresh as the blue-black leaves of holly.
Her light was cold and crisp; concrete.

Look how it drips the oozing moisture.

but no, he still is sleeping.

-Misty