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papergirlsfb started the topic The Good, the Bad, and the Morally Delayed in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
Following advice here, and posting my own ‘topic’.
Sorry about that, @pendragon ! I still don’t know my way around here yet.
As you might’ve guessed, my book title is called ‘The Good, the Bad, and the Morally Delayed’. I’m hoping to get it done by the next school year.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZR4zkJaY3QIT96r1z59vFPw8zHesfdITo2SEA9EMFKQ/edit?usp=sharing
This is just the first chapter, because the rest of it is super confusing. I have two main characters, and I thought it would be really cool to put both of their POV’s for each chapter (here’s where it gets confusing), and I have different versions of each, so on evernote I name each by putting Chapter One (the chapter) version 1 (the version) side a or b (who is narrating). A is Albert and B is Phillepe. Make sense?
Here’s chapter two:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/13Z99O7DSrJLwP90L4jqPgf-01SxSjCrGTzpycy0jT5I/edit?usp=sharing
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